All Comments on 'Stepsucker Ch. 02'

I wont say its the best ever but top 5 easy. Dont stop.

when is the next installment cumming? does he get to have sex with her????

By far one of the best stories I have read, please continue.

Very very good story so far. It would be great if you continued the story.

This is the best blowjob story that I have read on here! Keep it up (the writing) and let's get more involved. Maybe Amy has a younger sister still in high school or something to expand his horizons. And let him get a taste of pussy too!

Bring on the game.

This story and the last one were GREAT! Please add another one. You put so much detail into your stories. What I wouldn't give to be him. Great job, please write more!

Hate to be a fuddy duddy but you had a great innocent story going, with a build up, discovering sex for the first time, etc (Erotica) and now you just write drivel (Porn).

It wasn't believable after all the build up to his preciously hot step sister sucking him off that he didn't explode at the mere mention of her sucking his dick (Stepsucker) and it isn't believable that his stepsister brings home her friend and they blow him in the shower (stepsucker II). Where is the build up? where is the story? You didn't write for a year because you don't know how to write and it shows in your second try.

I agree with the previous comment. Your lead character becomes a porn star as opposed to the shy guy he was in the last story. There was no tension or build up. Your word choice was very strong, and it read very well. I just wouldn't call it a squel, because the characters were not the same as the previous story.

Just read both Stepsucker stories back to back and I really hope that it's not another year before chapter 3 comes out. Please keep up the great work!

Trilogy? Is that something like a three way? Any way you write the next one, I'll like it, I think. Nice straightforward stroke story with beautiful people and no frakkin' time travel or nipple clamps. BJ rules!!!

2006 brought us stepsucker, 2007 we saw chapter 2... I can only hope and imagine what's in store for 2008 :-) (hint hint)

very hot story. keep writing.

August is almost upon us. Your fans want more more more. Pleassssse! NOWW! It's 2008 bring on the 3rd and 4th Chapters. I enjoyed your writing and stories as well as alot of fans that did not comment. We're just waiting for what's next. We know they get out of that shower into some more thrillin DOM.

That was a great story. Nothing better than two hotties sucking and swallowing spunk

This is a great series, keep it up!

I hope you decide to write more of these type of stories. You do a really good job. One a year is better than none, but not nearly enough!

I hope you decide to write more of these type of stories. You do a really good job. One a year is better than none, but not nearly enough!

Great story!

some titfucking would be in order!=)

Love them both. If you have more in put it out--Mike

ur an awesome author =) cant wait for the next one

This is the hottest BJ story I've ever read. I am really more of a fan of one on one action, but I actually enjoyed the second part almost as much as the first.

Awesome, you seriously need to write one where he has sex with her.

Im not kidding. This story is in my top five stories in this site. I was a bit disappointed though because I thought Mark might join in.Im dyying for a third and fourth chapters. Hope they come out soon and keep up the good work man.

P.S When will he get to have sex with her?

I secretly hoped Mark would join in too! And yes, they have to fuck eventually....looking forward to the next ;)

I do hope you make another story. This is a very good story line.

excellent story :) when are you going to service those 2 lovely ladies?? It cant be all one-sided :)

not gonna make me wait a year to see him lose his virginity are you

love both stories. some of the best i've read. i really hope chapter 3 is coming and melissa is going to get fucked.

I almost jizzed just readimg these two stories

lets get step sisters brother involed

This has to be one on my fav Stories. Please make more!! This is my fantasy :P

Loved it. Need more like it.

You cant leave your fans hanging like this, we have got to know what happens??? Dose she get her little bro out of his shell or dose she keep him for herself???

Awesome story really looking forward to and intigued to know what happens next in or out of the shower. Keep up the good work

Loved your stories, short and full of fun. But I think sister and friend would really love some return affection, you know as an incentive.

This story is excellent and I enjoyed it immensely. Please consider writing a third part?

This is a great series. More please!

I see a wide and varied future for more stories continuing this story

I've been a lurker on this site for many many years, and for the first time a story so good has provoked me enough to comment in the hopes for a sequel... 9 years later.

Regardless I'm pretty sure you won't update, hell I don't even know if you'll read this however a story of this caliber deserved the effort from my end. Cheers!

holy ficking cum buckets and a half

I love 1 and 2. Plz!!! make a third. I would love to see Amy and Melissa riding him and facesitting.

Chapter 3 must be percolating?

I loved both chapters so far!

MEH!!! I ONLY want my dick and cum in a pussy.

Mmmmmmm, tasty. More pls

Amazing story! I loved the teasing from the first one and just wish this one had been a little longer! The characters are phenomenal. I would love to get more description of Melissa and Amy's bodies in the third. Better be a third haha. Can't wait to hear what the girls treat him to next.