All Comments on 'Steve & Kit Ch. 04'

I just started reading your stories and I am glad to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed this series. I look forward to chapter 5.

Congratulations on creating a character everybody hates more with each chapter!

I mean that as a compliment.

...and now a 3 month wait since chapter 4, will there be a chapter 5 ?

I do hope so !

Rapier

Hope it comes soon!!! Great series.

Theresa >>> Kit

I noticed a couple of continuity errors in this chapter. First, the date: the earlier chapters were set in the late 1960s, but in this chapter, Kit lets herself into Steve's house "using the digital keyboard", something that wasn't widely used until about 40 years later. Second, Steve's mother "had ... left for work" in this chapter, but an earlier chapter specifically mentioned that neither she nor Kit's mother worked outside the home. That aside, it's an enjoyable story.