All Comments on 'Steve and Kyle'

21 pages?? Way too long! Keep it around 7 pages and make multiple chapters. i.e. part 1, part2, part 3, etc

Epic novel! War and Peace anyone? It was a fun read, enjoyed the successes that Kyle was able to achieve, and Steve. Have been to Key West, and it is a unique place. Hope to be an occasional snowbird there one day soon. Actually, this story is a fairy tale, and I like them. Especially this kind. Thanks.