All Comments on 'Steve and the Indian Booth Babe'

A wonderful story, well crafted. A love story. I hope you continue writing.

Really nice work with all the engineering context. First time i read about matlab in an erotic story. Well done

But it would have been a better story if "Bela" had been Norwegian, or Swedish. Scandinavian women are hot; Indian women, not so much, unfortunately. Why can't we get more immigrants from Norway?

Appreciate it very very much that you had done many research about the Indian caste, and incorporate their culture into the storyline.

As an asian (south east), I could not help but feel very warming while reading this.

I love the story.. I love the plot and I definately love the happy ending! :)

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece!

Haven't you heard, anon? A Norwegian woman would have to be insane to emigrate to your racist shithole of a country. No offence.

And I'm sure Indian women everywhere are crying into their pillows at the loss of a porn-addled fucknugget such as yourself. Tragedy upon tragedy.

By far the best story I have ever read .. eroctic and hot.. the story ending is very nice..

A lot was good. The sexy was super sexy.

Except the shower. Soap in a vagina hurts, messes up the PH, and is generally bad. If you care about a woman, don't do it. On the outside is fine though. ;)

Bela's repetitive "I don't want to go back to India" line became annoying and eye rolling. She must think little of Steve's memory to repeat it so often. Her backstory is good.

5 stars, and thank you for reminding me of a wonderful Indian GF I used to date. Indian women are scathingly hot.

Especially when they're from Norway. XD

I couldn't read more than halfway through before I got tired of how the author was turning Bela into a prostitute.

All the people acting like rapists and molesting her got too much when that bastard fucked her. Not sure if he took her virginity or if she had been fucked by her uncle since she was nine, but I don't want to read about either.

Not sure why he is interested in someone prostituting herself, if there was actually supposed to be a romantic subplot, it failed miserably.

I am your loyal fan.

I loved the Boxcutter series, the Beach Charade series, and the Ashley Campaign series.

It was nice to read about Ashley again. Too bad we didn't see her relapse into her heroin addiction, have interracial affairs and get into non-consensual situations.

Interesting to see how Jean did not end up with Steve as suggested at the end of the Boxcutter series.

A definite 5 from me. I loved the slow buildup, unlike some of your other stories. Was disgusted by the anti-Indian comment. Women from any background can be sexy and appealing. Unless you don’t love women. I also appreciated that Steve was such a decent person. Thank you for sharing this story. You obviously put a lot of time into it. One of my favorites.

Amazing story. I couldn't stop reading until the very end. WOW.

This is a really good story that I enjoyed a lot. There were some very likeable main characters combatting some nasty bad guys (that were a bit cardboard like but nothing wrong in that). What’s more, I found the technical details added some substance and depth to the story. I really like this author and plan on reading more of these stories. Please keep writing!