All Comments on 'Steve Stevie Steven Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loving it

Loving the story please keep it going!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

It would be XXX nice to see the mom's come together !!!!!!!!

chytownchytownalmost 6 years ago
Good And Hot****

Thanks for sharing.

HillfrogHillfrogalmost 6 years ago
The fun just keeps on piling up

Enjoying myself immensely here. Ridiculous concept all in all, but such a happy crazy romp that I willingly suspend all critical disbelief. Good job! Dang!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good great parts ... Believable?

Nice story..... So tomorrow he gets pulled over and the cop blows him then he buys a lottery ticket and wins ? Beyond lucky this kid

jshsalvjshsalvalmost 6 years ago
How 'bout' Neil?

Gave you a 5 simply because that's all there is and I'm still laughing over this families affair. I say WTF, let's bring Neil in on this too and let he and Norman swing on Stevie as fluffers since Stevie has more pussy now than one man would have a hard time keeping it up that long. We seem to be bordering on too much C*** and not enough C**K. I'm hoping you plan on bringing in more characters into this. Why? No idea, except why not?? I like it !!!!

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
another 5 stars

a story with many sexy surprises. can't wait to see how you end it in the next chapter. What a great read. its what fantasy is all about!!!

i also like how you silence the English geeks among us - the "warning" at the beginning: "keep in mind that I try to include something for everyone, and some people are always looking for mistakes. So, if you find any errors, please remember that they are there for a reason". love that!!!!

jimjam69jimjam69almost 4 years ago
Damn

They're going to kill the poor guy.

Diecast1Diecast1about 2 years ago

Liking the story a lot more . AAAA+++++

Frankie1952Frankie195211 months ago

Fantastic this young bloke is in sexual heaven.

SmellerSmeller5 months ago

Hannah is not a lesbian, she is bisexual. Lesbians don't just have sex occasionally with men.

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Been writing stories for years, since I was a kid. Those were more tame and usually involved the head cheerleader falling in love with me. You won't see any willing cuckold stories, or any humiliation. I work in Loving Wives, Romance, and am branching into incest/taboo and gro...

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