All Comments on 'Steve Stevie Steven Ch. 05'

by BigGuy33

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loved it

I loved it and hope you keep going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

Really great job

chytownchytownalmost 6 years ago
Very Entertaining Read****

Thanks for sharing.

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 6 years ago
10 from me

Loved it, what a fantastic read. Thank you for sharing with me. I hope you can write some more like this one.

JimjonkJimjonkalmost 6 years ago
Excellent

I've really enjoyed the whole series. Yes, it was OTT, and a bit unbelievable, but isn't that what this site is all about. Keep up this kind of writing. My own writings, under another user name, have all been based on real life stories so I know how hard doing this can be, I've tried and failed!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Great story thanks for writing it and sharing with your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

the series was great 5 stars for all 5 chapters

MstChiefMstChiefalmost 6 years ago
Thanks

Thank you for an excellent series. I have enjoyed reading all of the chapters. Can't wait until you write another.

vividlyyoursvividlyyoursalmost 6 years ago
SIlly and fun

A ridiculous situation, but one that actually enhanced the overall story. I'm glad you didn't continue the dominance theme.

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
great story

5 stars for every chapter. Hard to believe you haven't written very much in this genre. This story shows you're a natural for it. And i agree with you - sometimes a just very big over the top story with a lot of great sex is perfect. like this one. I really liked the epilogue.

I wish more writers on this site followed your formula - you start the story with a bang, have a fun interesting story, and a great end. so many writers on this site cant get the basics. hopefully you'll write more "Incest/Taboo stories soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
...fun, but

TOO MANY BABIES.

robinhodrobinhodover 4 years ago
Sorry Big Guy

I love your stories and have read them all at least twice each.

Except this one.

Couldn't handle it at all. Bailed out halfway through Chapter 2.

Thank you for all the others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Robinhod is so very, very wrong!!!

This story had my wife of nearly 50 years and I so hot, we took several breaks, between chapters. Definitely NOT over the top.

jimjam69jimjam69almost 4 years ago
Great stories

Poor Steve, all those goings on are going to wear him out. He's going to be fucked if he doesn't watch out.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
Good story but.....

Steve was just a willing "boy toy" to 5 lesbians. I just didn't feel the love to make it anything else.

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyalmost 3 years ago

Enjoyed this series. Was a lot of fun to read. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pure shit.

SAV12SAV12over 2 years ago

W hat do I think? I think this story is one big cluster fuck. Unbelievable. The whole thing became a friends and family affair. Again unbelievable.

OldGuy1946OldGuy1946over 2 years ago

Enjoyable over the top story. I have been reading your stories (in alphabetical order) over the last sever days and one thing I have noticed is that by the time the male reaches his 60s he's pretty much done with sex. That may be true in some cases but others (such as myself) in our 70s still find great pleasure in the activities. Also many women are still very much interested in horizontal olympics. I realize each individual is different but please don't write us all off.

Diecast1Diecast1about 2 years ago

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

WoodencavWoodencavalmost 2 years ago

Enjoyed this storey, but agree with OldGuy1946 there’s plenty of sex left in those over 60, don’t write us off. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Laurentius0150Laurentius0150about 1 year ago

Sometimes fantasy runs amuck but can be fun Liked it as unreal as it is. We can all dream a little.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I thougjt this was well written. It was enjoyable, knowing that it is fiction. It is just what readers like. Now, to SAV12, your comments are hypocritical. You are nothing but and incest loving hound reader. So suck it up and quit whining.

Thank you

Frankie1952Frankie195211 months ago

Excellent series that I loved reading so very much. Thank you for sharing and I hope you will consider writing more like this one.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Beautiful and romantic story. Please keep writing for us reader to enjoy. Thank you so much for all your stories. Definitely a five star rating. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

LechemanLecheman10 months ago

I quite enjoyed this story especially with only the mention of cheating but no acknowledged (and drawn out ugliness) due to their couplings. Everyone ended up where I imagined and the love abounded between them all.

Great story and without doubt I will read again!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story. Maybe a little unbelievable but "nowadays" maybe not! I kept expecting, and maybe a little hoping, that Neil or even one of the ladies would get a chance at Neil's apparently virgin ass. Just seemed like that would complete the debauchery!!

RustyReaderRustyReader3 months ago

Well done. Sweet people story.

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