All Comments on 'Sticky Situation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Funny

I thought the twist at the end was cleverly written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
abrupt

a little wierd, she just came over. i know it was a dream, but it would mak emore sense if there was more contact between the two before they got it on.

StabProductionsStabProductionsover 12 years agoAuthor
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Abrubt: I was going with the whole, why would she be there as he didn't expect none of what happened to occur. However if the opportunity presents itself no matter how weird....if you really want it you just might go with the saying why look a gift horse in the mouth.

Funny: thanks I enjoying putting a little unexpected something in my writings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Glimmer in your eyes

As I read this I could see that devilish glimmer in your eyes ....the kind that makes a man's knees weak.

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