All Comments on 'Still Alive Pt. 02'

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Boyd Percy 6 months ago

Fantastic chapter! Wonder what spooked Mark at the end?

Baldy74 6 months ago

That was excellent, now to wait for the next chapter!

ender2k2k 6 months ago

Wow. Great story. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thank you

oldpantythief 6 months ago

Can't tell me there still isn't something bothering Mark. For a guy to go through what he has and not be scared somehow would be a miracle. Need to find out who he was working for, if anyone, and how he took the jet down. Loved the story and hope to see another chapter following soon.

SplitGeode66 6 months ago

An amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter! 5 stars .

Ironman52 6 months ago

love it. Keep it coming. 5*

hornier_bastard 6 months ago

another good story!

CrazyDaveTrucker60 6 months ago

Story well done. Sad that his almost-betrothed was killed. I do hope you have more to the story. It feels a bit like batman in a Gilley suit. He kills very bad guys in extraordinary ways. Her company should HIRE him. I wonder why this tough as nails guy ran away from a pretty girl in a tapas bar.?

Demosthenes384bc 6 months ago

Great read. I was SOOOoo hoping the Gray Man saved him, but maybe next time. 5.0*

Anonymous6 months ago

Very engaging story. Very well written.

Ironman52 6 months ago

I was ready for part 3. :(

tennesseered 6 months ago

Superior writing. Very engaging.

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