All Comments on 'Still Alive Pt. 03'

Fantastic! Are there more chapters to come for this story? If not, maybe a sequel down the road.

5

Great story and great writing. Thanks

Given the new beginning for Mark and the fact this was set 8 years ago, you've given yourselves plenty of scope to expand and extend these characters stories. I didn't like that you killed off the only "decent" Middle Eastern characters ostensibly to make room for Mark's new romance. I think there was scope for a much more nuanced tale to be had there.

Still overall I greatly enjoyed your work and look forward to your next offerings.

Five star+

Great story that I'm sad to see end, if it really did, lol. Glad that Mark was able to land right side up and enjoy the future he and Martel have. Still wondering how he managed to take down the jet with all the bad guys on it though? Got to give it five stars for the story and the love they had for each other.

Great story. This was supposed to be the last of the 6 Mark Wright stories. How's about giving us the first five, or a 7th story (kind of like the 6 stories in the "Hitchhikers Guide" trilogy.

Great series. The ending comes across as the end of ne journey and the start of another. I hope to see them again n the future. 5.0*

Way too sad for me, sorry.

Maybe it's just me, but I don't get authors, and this is a good one, who can't use "to be continued" or "the end". Just an observation!

EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT!!! You do know how to entertain your readers☺️

Yes, very well done. I agree with other comments that there is room for follow-up stories. Looking forward to seeing those.

It's a five from me. More, please?

Superb.

I like the story part of it... the character development, the intrigue, and just great story telling!

It seems that this group could be a long-running series if you choose. It has many of the elements in it of other stories that I very much enjoy, such as the Halo-25 series by markelly.

Can't give the story another five stars but I can say thanks for clearing up the question regarding how Mark took down the plane. Still good to read the rest of the story, thanks.