All Comments on 'Still Faithful, Always Pt. 01'

this is not LW story, this is s....... story

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There has been quite a few rehashes of this series that all involve divorce that in my opinion has completed the series I just hope this doesn't become another xleglover style series that never finishes

Same faithless, backstabbing, lying slut wife, same idiot, eunuch husband. Please don't subject us to the same crap. Lying title - should be Never Faithful, Ever.

You're in the wrong category.

The category is "loving" wives, not cheating, screwed-up wives (and her little man.)

Try BDSM, group sex, fetish (he's a sub), etc

And btw, what planet are these "people" from? Not earth.

A lot had happen to the 3 of them.No dynamic for Greg who has not grown up.

Ask yourself bobnobbi does Greg become a stale and spurn lover without sex with other women :you must be joking.

A 1 for a story without new plot.

Your story is mesmerizing. Well written and masterful.

I get a laugh out of your critics who hang on to everyone of your words, read ravenously to the end and then diss you with their comments. That always brings out a chuckle from me.

Looking forward to how the story ends.

5*

You are a retard.Do you realize this is just a repeat of a story this author wrote 4 years ago.WOW! Nothing new!

I feel that Dan has created a test of trust. He still loves Laura, but this time if Laura fails and rekindles her love for Greg again, this will be the end. I honestly feel after reading, Dan already knows both Laura and Greg has had sex and perhaps started or restarted their romance once again. I agree Laura is mixed up and at their ages, its time to settle or move on. Dan really needs to move on and further his life not bring it down. Laura needs to decide, this selfish lifestyle of desiring two husbands, one on the East, and one on the West, what kind of person does that. You cannot share feelings and emotions. Not to mention time. It will not work, and I think Chapter 2 will end the marriage of Dan and Laura. It has too.

old sicko that writes garbage, her husband is just a loser who as most people who get caught up in this lifestyle is scared of being on his own but knows what he lives with a pig.

Please focus on Dan this time. The last series was all about

Laura and her needs. She treated Dan so badly and now is

back with Greg. Could we have a lot more Dan and less

Laura and Greg.

to have a UKResearcher and BobnBobbi story on the same day. I have read neither one yet and to be honest neither author presents my view point as I am not into cuckoldism and the way each author generally portrays the husband as allowing the wife total dominance and lack of respect shown to him is a little off puttting. However, that being said they are both great writers with style and flair and know how to arouse (no pun intended) emotions and create drama. I have not read any of the comments yet but I assume there will be a bunch of trolls already. In any event I am looking forward to both stories and assume in advance I will not be disappointed. Anonymous 1

Hated them all the first time around .. Still hate them.

Hated the plot line the first time around ... Hate this, too.

Hated the horrible fetish ...still hate it.

But you sure can write better then 99% of the other writers here and if knowing all the above I still read it to the end it must mean your doing something right.

a continuation of this story? Did anyone request it be revived? Sometimes a simple death is the best answer.

LOL... way to go Bob N Bobbi... you have real talent LOL..

NOT

A tiresome load of muck. This new series seems to be more of the same.

This time Dan needs to move on and find a new love.

on how they can bitch about a story that hasn't even developed yet. I hope that they will just stop reading it but I fear they will keep going with their nasty mouths and brain dead comments. I hope the story will have Dan devoice his whore of a wife and move on with his life. But if not so be it, it's BobNbobbi's story. If you don't like it stop reading it you retards. I hope this will end his pain and he will find a true love and have a great life. maybe her plane will crash or the car will and she will choke to death from her lover's cock stuck in her throat!! But either way I gave it a 5 and will keep reading to enjoy the story regardless of the pain or pleasure it gives me. B&B don't let these shit for brains keep you from writing and finishing this story. It's good and you should finish it.

I'm amazed at the shit for brains that keep attacking other readers for having opposing opinions. Listen bird brain you don't like the comments don't read them. Always wondering what makes scum like you tick. You must get a rush attacking other readers, just like the rush I got setting your ass straight. Fuck off, nobody wants to read your whiny comments. As far as this author goes, I wouldn't read anything he ever writes, glorifying cheating sluts/willing cuckold with his comments.

Regardless of this and that or who doesn't like what the bottom line is that these people are sickos and have an extreme fetish. FETISH!

Glad you are resuming the old series. Its a great start. I was mildly disappointed that the greg-dan-laura dynamics was not given more word space and instead a lot of space was devoted to Artsy and LF.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Ignore the trolls.3 Why would you be in the LW section if you don't like cuckold stories?

Good job Bob! This is a bomb shell for the BTB twinkies.

Spoken like a true Cuckerotica.Wimp. Loving Wives is supposed to be all about cuckoldry.No wonder thissiite sucks anymore Idiots like great stuff.This is reconstituted tripe from years ago.Nothing new

And all of them voted for Obamma, just saying.

Crap

I thought this story ended back in 2010. BobNbobbie gave it one ending which left a lot to the imagination. Stormx came along and produced a more realistic ending to the story. The latter ending was complete and both parties were hurt and had to start a new life from that point on. Lets keep the dead dog buried and not drag through the mud anymore.

This is just the opening,but it sets up a basic question,and that is Laura wants to have it all and will Dan go for it.She wants two husbands but she seems,incapable of understanding that means sharing love with both,rather than what she wants,love from Dan and love to Greg..and in a poly relationship that won't work.She might not discard Dan's rings but she continues to forget him when it comes to greg,and that is cruelty.If this is to be a poly story she cannot be the vain bitch projecting love while being cruel;eventually dan would say Goodbye.Greg never esrned his place,Dan did,and in the end Dan will resent greg claiming what he didn't earn.One critique,you have Dan having breakfast with Laura when she is,in SF...

BNb, I will admit that I liked how Stormx ended this story. It brought closure. Yet, your story brings an ambiguity that is both puzzling and interesting. The real problem is not Laura's desire for two lovers, it is her complete selfishness and demand that they both be her husband. The odd thing is she treats her "real" husband far worse than her "pretend" husband. She did it in the past and she is clearly setting up to do it again.

It is hard not to root for Dan to finally say good bye. He would be better served being out of her life and if he cannot be out of her life, he would be better treated being the "second" husband. Then Greg can be treated as he deserves... badly. Just like Dan has been treated.

Odd story, but it will be interesting to see how you handle it now that it has been rekindled.

It is nice to have this story revived and presented for our delectation. Not only is it well crafted, but the characters have an innate appeal that I find widely fetching. My hope--regardless of your intent--is that Dan finally understands that Laura, despite her countless professions of love for him, is actually demoting him to an inferior status in comparison with her lover, Greg. Dan is intelligent; he has all the fawning women he needs; let him contemplate and then effectuate, divorce from his ever-more self-centered slut of a wife.

I don't want to judge a story like this. I find it impossible to be a fair judge when it comes to stories about a loveless marriage. I tried reading through the original series, but I didn't like it so I just skipped to the end to see how it ended. I was not impressed. I tried to read through this to see if it was going to work toward real love. Once again, was not impressed.

I do like cheating stories, but there has to be a level of underlying love. If an author writes a cheating story and choses to keep the characters together, I like to see the characters try to make it work by learning how to be a spouse to the other person. I like to see the path from betrayal, to confrontation, then to remorse, then to struggle, then finally to forgiveness and reconciliation. If on the other hand the author decides to split them up, I like to see both people work through the issues and then move on with their lives. In stories like this, those conflicts are gone because you have one spouse who is incapable of love, and the other spouse who is so weak and has so little self esteem that they just sit around and get shit on. They both just stay stuck and the story goes nowhere. All that is left is a bunch of sex scenes, never ending pain, and no growth.

I know that some people have marriages that deviate from what we consider normal. There are open marriages, wife sharing, and even cuckolding. If it works for them, then who am I to judge? However, no matter what your marriage looks like, love still looks the same. First and foremost, true love is not selfish. True love does not have one person knowingly hurting their spouse and not caring. If you are into cuckolding, it has to work for BOTH people. If it doesn't, then it isn't love.

I know that some people get off on the pain of the weak husband, and that is why a story like this holds appeal to them. I like to read about the struggles of love, and two people trying to make a bad situation work so they can move into the future. A story like this doesn't have any love, and therefore it just makes me feel empty when I read it. I try to avoid stories like this because I can't be fair when voting. Unfortunately I sometimes get caught up in one and become invested in the characters before I realize that this will remain a loveless story. When this happens I unfortunately can't give it anything but one star.

Trash the first time, regurgitated trash the second

I just read StormX's ending, and I must say that I liked it a lot. I liked it so much that I can not finish this series. I feel that this author is going to simply use Dan as a punching bag for emotional cruelty, and it will ruin the story for me. I know that this author is the original author so it seems kind of odd that HIS ending will ruin the story for me, but I can't help it. If I keep reading about Dan getting hurt over and over again just for the emotional response that it gets, I will continue to rate it low. As I said before, I can't judge these stories fairly. So I wanted to wish the author luck with his writing, and I hope he has much success. I urge the other people who don't like these stories to also stop reading. It seems unfair to the author and to yourself to waste your time on a story that's going to anger you, You know the direction the author is going to take with this story. I suggest that you allow the people who enjoy these types of stories to read them, and you find a story that you enjoy.

To me this is just another example of man hating crap, but that's just me.

I can't believe this shit is back. Oh yes I can. This is bnb's reason for living.

Just another loser making waves across the pond.

The earliest psychologist to make a bunch of money left academe because of his Dean's wife's infatuation with his amorous talent! (The Dean was NOT a willing cuck!) Went into commercial consultation and made a lasting discovery (hence the Big Bucks!)

#It doesn't matter if a reader LOVES an ad, or HATES it! If they REMEMBER it, money will flow in from the sales!#

'Faithful' seems to be consistent with the spirit of that discovery! Almost no commenter is neutral! I happen to think that 'Faithful' is a classic (of good writing!)

Before anyone wastes electrons trying to besmirch every aspect of my being, let me hasten to add that I think Laura is the Prototype Queen Bitch! Also, Dan is about as clueless as a lava rock about protecting his own sanity. Take away Greg's big dick and you're left with an ambulance-chaser who Laura would not hire to notarize her subscription form for The Daily Beast! It is the SKILL of BnB that causes those emotions to boil in the readers!

5* and thanks!

BobNbobbie had San show his femimine side in the first series of Always Faithful. I hope this time the author allows Dan to be the Alpha Man and not Greg. Laura was not honest with her husband befote she left for the week. She showed her true colors when with Hreg on first date. Set the plot and her goal of trying to change Dan to 2ndbe tier husband again. I hope BobNbobbie shows his once Alpha Male side before he turned Bi sexual. He said he was married for 30you years before divorced. So he does know the feeling at least a little, it would have been what attracted his wife to him in the first place.

When I originally published Always Faithful in 2010 there was a screw up in the way the last half dozen or so chapters were presented that prompted StormX to write a version of the story ending that was his, not mine. I would like to make several points on what StormX wrote and how that came to be.

1 - StormX did not at any time before or after consult with me about his alternative story - I really think that should have been done as common courtesy.

2 - I do think, and I said this publicly in comment, that StormX did a pretty good job of trying to keep the characters and plot moving in the stream I first painted.

3 - I am quite sure that the way StormX painted Laura in his version was far more severe and negative than I created her. Yes, she was a certified bitch, no doubt, and her behavior was far too often cruel toward husband Dan, but there was never a doubt that she loved him and the relationship they had over her relationship with Greg.

4 - The third point above is critical to AF and to Still Faithful, Always - Laura did not select based solely on bedroom sex, she chose love and that is what StormX seemed to leave out of his alternative ending to Always Faithful. I have not gone back and read StormX's story but as I recall it ends in classic burn the bitch and get rid of her fashion so Dan can marry Artsy.

5 - That my point four above is popular does not surprise me. It is a plausible ending. I complimented (is that better katib?) StormX on writing because I have seen far too many stories here where another writer takes/steals torch and goes down tunnels even the white rabbit could never dream of. Whatever end point alternative readers and potential revisionists might want to see was not mine at all. I selected that Always Faithful title with clear thought, purpose - surprise maybe but no sarcasm - and the ending I wrote clearly in mind.

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I am reading all comments and only decided to make some comment now on StormX's ending because it seemed so prevalent in the comments of others. I will share whatever comments and thoughts I may have after the ending in Part Four. I do hope you will read the remainder of Still Faithful, Always with an open mind. I wish I could have published this in one simple post but it would have come to twenty or so Lit pages and that number is far too long to expect readers to wade through.

BNb

BnB,

Great job . . . an emotional story for me.

Matt

What a retard.

1*

BoobNBobbi with more.of.his cuck and whore shit.

The writing and storytelling are impeccable, well done, and impactful—that's WHY the readers loathe Laura. If this were a poorly written, half-baked BTB in which the Martians had zapped the wife into a "size zombie," I'd laugh and vote on the writing only, which is usually much worse than the idiotic storytelling. Here, we "see" a real-life situation because BnB can write evocatively. We readers like or dislike characters who resonate and feel realistic. We see Laura as an entitled narcissist who has absolutely no empathy or sympathy. She grieves for Dan only as it affects her, and she is oblivious to how her actions damage him. StormX granted us relief from Laura and got some much-needed "justice" in the sense that justice balances things. Yes, I LOVE your writing, but you treat Laura as only a writer who is blinded by her character's imperfections is capable. The consensus was that she should suffer for her craven betrayal of Dan--this was one of those "let sleeping dogs lie" tales.