All Comments on 'Stimulus Bill Ch. 02'

writing could be a little improved got a little off track, to much information put out there in the last couple of paragraphs, but the subject matter is fantastic. I want to know more about Cathy sucking her bosses ass, an ass slut but never with her husband, she cheated pretty regularly I guess? Sure she used an escort service or did she service them herself? Maybe we need some after action discussion regarding everyone's feelings and this could come out. Knock up one of the girls and continue having sex, multiple fetishes there, prego, incest, eventually lactation, what fun. The women can rotate pregnancies and they never have to work again. Looking forward to more of this story

Yeah, after they all find out mom has been cheating and slutting herself out for her last job hubby and girls can decide she needs to submit to being controled. Then introduce bdsm with mom as the submissive bitch. Another fetish added!! Keep it all in the family, as hubby lovingly and lightly dominates daughters and they all roughly and strickly dominate wife as payback for years of cheating when she was Charlie's sub. Force her to submit to std testing, permenant body hair removal, piercings and tattoos while the decision is made to avoid STDs by keeping the loving within the family group. Maybe mom can be made to sleep in daughter's bed while daughters move in as her replacement with dad? Whoo Hoo! Well, or whatever, didn't intend to try to take over the story there. Great job so far.

Great story, keep going, but get some editing help.

Good story. Another chapter with revenue from the videos, any additions to the filming etc etc.

Never mind the need for some good editing, the story was quite good. Now you need to pen additional chapter(s) to let us know how the finances turned out plus possible updates on the videos . . . .