All Comments on 'Stolen Alchemy Ch. 01'

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testdrivertestdriverover 4 years ago
Stoen Alchemy 1

I definitely want some of that potion ! And a part 2 would be good as well :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved it

Cant wait for part 2. Makes me wonder what would happen to him if he drank it

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Odd

Pussy juice isn't "sticky" in my universe...don't understand how they could enjoy sex if it isn't slick or slippery.

Not real believable that Alexei wouldn't have immediately stored/hidden the concentrated elixir if Peter was a moron, especially if, as you presented it, it was the most valuable concoction he'd ever produced.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry, i voted 1. And i tell you why... i was about to comment a thank you for not modifying her breast size, when it happened. Her chest got larger, tell me why? because lager the better, isnt it? Larger the funnier. The sexier. How great it would be if it exists such a potion so to body modifying all those flawed women with an A cup, or a B. You decided to tag this story 'small breasts' so expect people can be deceived and even a bit offended.

An unappreciated small bitch.

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