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Loved your story! Whether as a short stand-alone or the start of a more extended story, this really hit the mark.

Thanks for creating and sharing. The plot, in the hands of a less skilled writer, could easily degenerate. But you have two (maybe three) interesting characters. I hope you let us know more of their story(ies).

Again, thanks for creating and sharing

You are a tremendous writer. I've enjoyed all of your writings. Please keep submitting such great stuff!

No stopping once they started... the flirting the flattery and then the moment of truth, fast and furious.

You definitely have a way with words and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for sharing and this story is well worth the time to read.

Regards

Jewellee

taking us progressively into their minds. Searing sex. A remarkable story by a remarkable writer.