by Slappy101
My only complain is that they chapters that youve submitted are so short. overall i like the story and wish you'd write and post more.
....make it longer but of course if this is real then it is all you can write. Good writing!
...but you'd better clean yourself off VERY WELL in case your girl decides to give you a BJ. If she detects even the slightest taste of another woman on your dick, YOU'RE A DEADMAN!