All Comments on 'Storm Damage Pt. 02'

"Gail recognizes the smile in Pauline now and says to Lisa, "Baby, I'm sorry, but nothing will remove this grin for a while. Your brother is one hell of a ride."

After breakfast, which is really lunch for me, I go back to bed. Pauline and Gina stayed for a while and talked with Lisa. They are friends and caught up on all the gossip. I slipped in and out of sleep all afternoon. Both girls got my complete history along with the stories from the last four days minus yesterday as Lisa did not see that."

A very good story, hope to see the next chapter soon.

I'm loving this story as I do most of your work.

5 stars. i can't believe idiots like the anonymous guy who rails over a typo. except for that 1 error, i thought the story was well written - and well-edited. can't wait for chapter 3

Endless platitudes about how this guy is the best of everything. Got old. By the way when you're hanging rock (drywall) you do the lids first walls second. When you're tiling showers, floors first, walls second. Also took shower with with Vicki and Carla but when Gina (or is it Gail) and Pauline want one it doesn't work. The first part was okay, this part was all ego stroke

MORE , MORE , MORE !

Thank you for keeping the time between chapters very short! There's nothing worse than waiting months between chapters to the point that you have to start reading from the beginning to figure out you'd going on.

Loving this story! 5 BIG FAT SPARKLING STARS!

The story isn’t bad. Not fond of all the demands placed on the fella. Works like a dog and gets used by the women as a fuck toy. Bunch of selfish bitches.

This story has unfulfilled potential. The author fairly well describes the aftermath of a hurricane, including the rebuilding efforts, but the main protagonist, Hunter, is too much of a super-human sex machine. At least he didn't have the customary 8" dick. There are also too many characters in this story...