All Comments on 'Storm Damage Pt. 04'

Looking forward to part 5, a very beautiful and great story.

You know I love your writing but I wonder how much farther you can take this one. I am so ready for more and really enjoy the way you are releasing them so quickly.

Great story. 5 stars. Well written.

ass hole comes into my house and orders me like that he better have a gun or he will be dead PDQ. but a great story either way.

This story has unfulfilled potential. The author fairly well describes the aftermath of a hurricane, including the rebuilding efforts, but the main protagonist, Hunter, is too much of a super-human sex machine. At least he didn't have the customary 8" dick. There are also too many characters in this story...