All Comments on 'Storm of Shadows Ch. 05'

Man cant Wait for your next chapter. Damn clif hanger

I'm not good with cliff hangers, lol. And this seems like an intense cliff hanger-y story. I would rather read it when it's done. How far along are we in this story? Halfway? Quarter way?

You are so evil sometimes.... brilliant... but evil.

Great installment to the series.

Mary

Another evil cliff hanger? I am going to hide all your coffee.

Thanks for the chapter !

. . . . . Hanger , sweet misery . . . thank you story teller . . . be well !

We are addicted to your stories but you are not posting fast enough to prevent Jaz withdrawals. Please post more frequently or make them much longer. It's for your readers sanity.

Another Cliffhanger who would have guessed that would happen. Great chapter look forward to the next one in 2016. Have an awesome Christmas and New Year my friend and see ya on fb.

Willie

I cannot wait to read the next chapter!!! Ahhhhhh! Thank you Jaz!!!

Why couldn't this story have been made into a movie instead of twilight? way better than a sparkly love triangle.

You a a very cruel writer. A cliffhanger like that is just mean.

I don't even have words right now. I agree that this could be an amazing movie series and I would probably spend a great deal of money supporting it, LOL! I can't wait for the next chapter, because shit's finna hit the fan!!! Whew!!

You are evil I say. Who needs Star Wars when we have you? Dear lord send us more.

What a fantastic chapter! Thank you so much for posting it right before Christmas. It was absolutely stunning. I thought your story telling skills couldn't get any better. I was so wrong! Thank you again Jaz!

I've very little joy this holiday season as alone I sit waiting for time to pass. This story has electrified me since I found it and followed through the lives of all it contains. Please do continue?

All i want for christmas is the next chapter soon.

Great amazing wonderful unbelievably good. I am not a word smith so just know i love every instalment you post and cant wait for the next.

what anonymous said!!

Love to series. All I can say is please don't leave us hanging any longer.

Fabulously and so beautifully done!!

But you've GOTTA stop leaving me hung like this Jaz milove!!

NEXT chapter!! Let's GO!!!

Loving it,

Izzie

great story so far :)

kothi and agony are by far my favorite characters so far.

Will go crazy waiting for more... hope you will publish soon! Great story Jaz!! Love U!!

I'm so on the edge of my seat! Cant wait for the next chapter

favorite character of this series ..Kothi

Please post more soon.

JUST PERFECT!!!! Happy New Year!!! You made my night and ensured that my literary jones will be fed for quite a while with your wonderful imagination!!! I may have to wait for an update, but boy oh boy is it going to be worth it. HA!

You totally ROCK!!!!

I can feel the danger in the air coming from so many sources that it's hard to know where to turn first. Go get 'em Agony! Maybe the human girl will bring Kothi forward again or at least bring the two sides into balance. As he stands, Agony is just another source of danger. Justice requires two sides of the balance, and Agony needs Kothi to bring the balance of the Justice Seeker.

Damn!! I needed more this morning..and you leave me hanging.. again.. :)

Please post longer chapters!!!

Before the end of the story. Patience. Argh

WHY ARE YOU SO DAMNED GOOD AT WHAT YOU DO OMG I FUCKING LOVE YOU. talent is what you have my Friend. Talent with a capital T.

I BOUGHT FTI @AMAZON. IF YOU COULD WEAR OUT AN EBOOK, THE PAGES WOULD BE DOG EARED! LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS!

I tried to wait until this story was done before I started and utterly failed. It seems I picked a horrible place to have to end though :(. I've never commented before but wanted to let you know how much I love your stories. I've Reread all of your stories numerous times and still can't get enough! Keep up the good work and thank you!!!!

I can't wait until the next chapters are uploaded!! This just keeps getting better :)

I was going to wait for you to finish then read it all in one sitting but I couldn't do it! Lol woe is me! Thanks for the chapter and for the continuation of Kothari's story. I love the new characters that have been added as well as the peeks we get into the older characters. Keep doing what you do Jaz!

You are evil! Worst spot ever to stop! You and your cliffhangers :) Love it, I was on the edge of my seat just then! Write soon please!

I have read all your stories up to this point! I love how you make the characters so lifelike and I root for them all. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for your next chapter!

CRAP! Is all I can say! Someone's going to get it! Lol. It's almost been a month since the last update... Will anxiously be awaiting the next chapter. :) Awesome work Jazz!

This is the best part of the series so far!!!

Jaz I hate you so much. You literally formed a god damned family/community. I read ever story from the start and I am like, yeah Demetei and Mara is the best! :D no wait, RAFEEEE AND LACEYYY <3 omg Omg TWINS!?!? Hotness. Oh fuck Nors and Ashleigh!?!? Ok they are my fave now. OMG LILY GREW UP SHE IS THE HOTTEST I LIKE HER THE MOST. omg pietro is so warrior like *ovaries exploding* Cassia and Pietro are my absolute faveeeee. -haha elina & karn its so obvious you guys *inserts oh stop it you meme* OMG KOTHARI IS LETHAL AND INSANE HE IS MY FAVOURITE.

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Fucking hell so what the fuck is my favourite now. This is one hell of a roller coaster. Ok fuck that I am in Jaz's world, Jaz is my favourite. I want to hug you and sleep. I think I am bipolar like Nors. Lol

I deliberately avoid this site for months at a time because the constant checking for a new installment almost reached OCD level in my life. I've been captivated ever since ALWH and the stories keep getting better. I greedily read SoS parts 2-5 in a couple of hours and now I'll struggle to wait again. Very few of the many tales I read have held my interest long enough to finish a series much less earn a second read yet I find myself wanting to go back to the beginning for a third time. Waiting my drive me nearly insane but I know it will be worth the wait.

Please please finish?

I've been following this story for a long time and I can't get it out of my head. I need to read more! Love it!

You don't normally use cliffhangers. That is just mean.

I've read every chapter up to this one so many times my mind is screaming for more.

Please, please, please continue????

I really really love your work!! Only author in the non human category I ever read! Please NEVER stop gifting us with the gloriousness that you are👏🙌👍👊😁😍😘💖💛💙💜💚❤💗💓💕💞💘...ok Im done now.

P.s. I love you

This chapter really has me thinking. I expected Agony to be this heartless animal, but when he saved the wold pup, helped her get vengeance, then got her to safety, it had me scratching my chin. I’ll admit, the vengeance was a little extreme, but didn’t surprise me.

You have managed to create the perfect “grey” character. He’s not completely evil, but sure as hell not a good character either. There’s a chart out there somewhere that categorizes chaotic good, chaotic evil etc etc. someone needs to find it and place Agony on there somewhere lol