by JazCullen
So happy a new chapter is up. It feels like I waited forever. But sad because I know the wait for the next part begins. And the wait is torture. Great story Jaz. You are the Queen of storytelling.
Short and sweet and completely wonderful!!!! I am still addicted!
I have been constantly checking the next installment like forever. I am enthralled by your storytelling skills. Thank you very much you are active again. God bless
I loved it as always! I'm glad to hear about the other characters I've loved from previous stories as well. I'm so enthralled in your stories!
I love your stories Jaz, and especially here to see you dragging Agony kicking and screaming into the fold!
What I love about each of your separate stories under this umbrella story is that you allow each story to unfold and then slowly bring in elements from the other stories and weave them together.
So Dara's telling Agony where to get off, and Kallum, Lily, Elina, and Brandon are about to sidle in left stage and get in on the action!! Brilliant!
So can't wait for the next instalment!! I really hope we'll get to hear more about Rayne and Gard
I hope the wait for the next chapter will not be so long, Great chapter although the progress is so very slow!
I'm so happy you've updated! I hope all is well!
Since this chapter was dealing with the aftermath, setting things up, it was a bit of filler, but then after everything that juat happened, room for a breath isn't a bad thing. I can't wait to see more between Elina and Karn, and more interactions between Agony/Kothari and Talia. Also, I love Dara's character- she's maybe one of my favorites so far, there's a lot more to her than first impressions suggest.
I hope you are able to update again soon, and thank you for taking the time to write for us 😘
Agony won a fight against multiple vampires in chapter 6, but he doesn't know how to fight mentally against having someone invade and influence his mind. If he and Dara get to Romania and the leader of their opponents is still there, their presence could be detected and they could be captured the same way his parents were captured.
Having said that, I liked this chapter and will wait to see what Kallum and Lily discover.
Dara and Fox mates perhaps as he felt something when he was near her sister???
...but one thing just made me laugh.
Wolf kid loses her parents violently, then her new adoptive pack also gets torn to shreds... and people worry about "language" in her presence?! :-D
Caleb and Anne need to go. The Queen can end this upsurge. Man, what's going on with Gard and Rayne tho?
A new chapter- and a great one at that! (Aren't they all, though?)
I hope the next update comes soon!!
now, this-is just me, but tali might be little more then just agony/kothis mate , think of how he is about his parents, now threaten his mate, does the word reaper mean anything
I think Tali will trigger all kinds of things..., and yes, reaper comes to mind. But now I am starting to think Kothi's balance will come from Liam. Liam was the first to hear Agony as a child..., and I am thinking as an adult he maybe able to tap into Agony's psyche. His need for acknowledgement and therefore acceptance. Maybe? Agony marches to his own drum in his mind but I think all people want to be known for themselves. Just pondering. I am keyed up and waiting for the Battle Royale. I think there will be a lot of surprises. I also think the Queen & King will know and acknowledge that Kothi/Agony is what is needed in the moment and also they will resolve Kothi/Agony/Panther's co-existence. Besides, they are gonna be Pippa's new dad. Who has time for killing sprees when your daughter needs you and you are trying to impress your mate who for the most part doesn't like you. HA!
This is the late night madness that occurs when you type "To be continued..."
Can't wait for another chapter. Thanks for this.
Love your work! Can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing your wonderful storytelling with us.
The dark force that is behind this discord...., I wonder if it has to do with a preceived wrong? I just re-read about Elijah and a performed ritual..., and in truth I am just guessing cause it is fun. Lol. Jaz, your work is wonderful and I can't believe I still cry over stories that I have read time and time again. The emotion is there and the intrigue is there. I am going back in to theorize, ponder and just take a familiar journey. Thanks for what you do. Be well.
Aargh! I liked it better before I caught up. Now I have to wait for each chapter.
If it wasn't so good the wait wouldn't be so bad. But that doesn't mean I want you to get sloppy! I love your writing as it is!
Keep the great chapters coming.
Wow. I have finally got caught up on your story. Great writing. I get started and read for a couple of hours. Please continue. Thank You.
Is everything okay. It's been a few months since last post and you used to post every month. Just wanted to see if you were okay and I am sure I'm not the only one to wonder. I still check daily for updates
great chapter..!!!
but nxt chapter is taking too long :-(
cant wait to read again..
but its worth it. :-)
fingers crossed nxt chpter would be coming soon..
Yeah that's why a woman writes story after story after story about them and other women read them and cream their pants. Makes total sense. lol.
To Anon - it is perfectly possible, and even common, to both love and be annoyed as hell with someone. It is especially common with overprotective males.