All Comments on 'Storm of Shadows Ch. 07'

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Iread2relaxIread2relaxalmost 8 years ago
Happy and Sad

So happy a new chapter is up. It feels like I waited forever. But sad because I know the wait for the next part begins. And the wait is torture. Great story Jaz. You are the Queen of storytelling.

BigDog167BigDog167almost 8 years ago
Great chapter.

Loved it as always.

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26almost 8 years ago
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More more more, please????

Short and sweet and completely wonderful!!!! I am still addicted!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

NICE :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great storytelling skills!

I have been constantly checking the next installment like forever. I am enthralled by your storytelling skills. Thank you very much you are active again. God bless

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great Chapter

I loved it as always! I'm glad to hear about the other characters I've loved from previous stories as well. I'm so enthralled in your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Boring........

and overwrought. will go back to FTI.

FloribundaFloribundaalmost 8 years ago
SO glad to see you writing again here!

I love your stories Jaz, and especially here to see you dragging Agony kicking and screaming into the fold!

What I love about each of your separate stories under this umbrella story is that you allow each story to unfold and then slowly bring in elements from the other stories and weave them together.

So Dara's telling Agony where to get off, and Kallum, Lily, Elina, and Brandon are about to sidle in left stage and get in on the action!! Brilliant!

So can't wait for the next instalment!! I really hope we'll get to hear more about Rayne and Gard

willieonewillieonealmost 8 years ago
I hope

I hope the wait for the next chapter will not be so long, Great chapter although the progress is so very slow!

FriskyFknKittenFriskyFknKittenalmost 8 years ago
Thank you for the update!

I'm so happy you've updated! I hope all is well!

Since this chapter was dealing with the aftermath, setting things up, it was a bit of filler, but then after everything that juat happened, room for a breath isn't a bad thing. I can't wait to see more between Elina and Karn, and more interactions between Agony/Kothari and Talia. Also, I love Dara's character- she's maybe one of my favorites so far, there's a lot more to her than first impressions suggest.

I hope you are able to update again soon, and thank you for taking the time to write for us 😘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Welcome back!!

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Thanks for coninuing the story. I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Prediction

Agony won a fight against multiple vampires in chapter 6, but he doesn't know how to fight mentally against having someone invade and influence his mind. If he and Dara get to Romania and the leader of their opponents is still there, their presence could be detected and they could be captured the same way his parents were captured.

Having said that, I liked this chapter and will wait to see what Kallum and Lily discover.

willieonewillieonealmost 8 years ago
mmm speculation

Dara and Fox mates perhaps as he felt something when he was near her sister???

JhyrJhyralmost 8 years ago
Glad for another chapter...

...but one thing just made me laugh.

Wolf kid loses her parents violently, then her new adoptive pack also gets torn to shreds... and people worry about "language" in her presence?! :-D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Welcome back! !

Loved it!! Can't wait for the next chapter 😁

Iread2relaxIread2relaxalmost 8 years ago
ROMANIA?

Caleb and Anne need to go. The Queen can end this upsurge. Man, what's going on with Gard and Rayne tho?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Can't wait til the next one!

Good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
THANK YOU

Please update again soon. Love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Yay!

A new chapter- and a great one at that! (Aren't they all, though?)

I hope the next update comes soon!!

cat1028cat1028almost 8 years ago
the hidden

now, this-is just me, but tali might be little more then just agony/kothis mate , think of how he is about his parents, now threaten his mate, does the word reaper mean anything

blastwizardblastwizardalmost 8 years ago
Interesting...

I think Tali will trigger all kinds of things..., and yes, reaper comes to mind. But now I am starting to think Kothi's balance will come from Liam. Liam was the first to hear Agony as a child..., and I am thinking as an adult he maybe able to tap into Agony's psyche. His need for acknowledgement and therefore acceptance. Maybe? Agony marches to his own drum in his mind but I think all people want to be known for themselves. Just pondering. I am keyed up and waiting for the Battle Royale. I think there will be a lot of surprises. I also think the Queen & King will know and acknowledge that Kothi/Agony is what is needed in the moment and also they will resolve Kothi/Agony/Panther's co-existence. Besides, they are gonna be Pippa's new dad. Who has time for killing sprees when your daughter needs you and you are trying to impress your mate who for the most part doesn't like you. HA!

This is the late night madness that occurs when you type "To be continued..."

Can't wait for another chapter. Thanks for this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I'd like some more please

Love your work! Can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing your wonderful storytelling with us.

blastwizardblastwizardalmost 8 years ago
So I have been re-reading....,

The dark force that is behind this discord...., I wonder if it has to do with a preceived wrong? I just re-read about Elijah and a performed ritual..., and in truth I am just guessing cause it is fun. Lol. Jaz, your work is wonderful and I can't believe I still cry over stories that I have read time and time again. The emotion is there and the intrigue is there. I am going back in to theorize, ponder and just take a familiar journey. Thanks for what you do. Be well.

nicintasnicintasalmost 8 years ago
Please Mam....

Can I have some more ?!?!?!?!

Perfection as always !!

ausvirgoausvirgoover 7 years ago
Thank You! Another great chapter.

Aargh! I liked it better before I caught up. Now I have to wait for each chapter.

If it wasn't so good the wait wouldn't be so bad. But that doesn't mean I want you to get sloppy! I love your writing as it is!

Keep the great chapters coming.

j76475j76475over 7 years ago
AGAIN ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER

Wow. I have finally got caught up on your story. Great writing. I get started and read for a couple of hours. Please continue. Thank You.

DeltoramastrDeltoramastrover 7 years ago
Where are you

Is everything okay. It's been a few months since last post and you used to post every month. Just wanted to see if you were okay and I am sure I'm not the only one to wonder. I still check daily for updates

ravim1996ravim1996over 7 years ago

great chapter..!!!

but nxt chapter is taking too long :-(

cant wait to read again..

but its worth it. :-)

fingers crossed nxt chpter would be coming soon..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
"Overprotective males," she sighed "The bane of every woman's existence".

Yeah that's why a woman writes story after story after story about them and other women read them and cream their pants. Makes total sense. lol.

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

To Anon - it is perfectly possible, and even common, to both love and be annoyed as hell with someone. It is especially common with overprotective males.

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