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LoveDeniedabout 3 years agoI love this series and bought FTI as soon as it was available. In this re-reading I am just noticing the problem with geography. If everyone is starting from Scotland, which the story implies, then they aren't going to go north to get to Romania and certainly not by train - until they get to the continent. Just a thought before this installment (and the earlier ones referencing Scotland) go to publishing for purchase. Keep up the great work!!
nicintasover 5 years agoI agree with your premise, but he can’t be guardian of Annie’s baby. It said that the queen always gives birth to the next guardian of the next queen first. So the baby she’s pregnant with now is going to be that guardian. But Kothi could definitely be a guardian of the Vârcolac and there future children…
Good ideas though!
LupaSolarisover 5 years agoI'm in my third or forth re-reading of the saga... Here is what I think about the "Kothari issue"...
- The Vârcolac are the more powerful race existing.
- The Triumvirate members are the most powerful vampires, and maybe the only ones more powerful than the Vârcolac.
- The Guardian and the First-Born Vârcolac are the oldest living beings on Earth.
- All of this may make Kothari something like The most powerful being...
- Every Vârvolac suffered the overprotectiveness of the adults around them. They now struggle to find their limits, their purpose in life...
Now just imagine this overpowered child... He is the son of someone that spent six thousand years devoted to his younger sister, and someone that spent three thousand years not knowing who she was, but still helping lost souls like her, being happy with their happiness.
Kothari needs to be useful, needs to be in charge of protecting the ones he loves. Lets remember every moments we went «Awww, he's so good when he wants to!...»? That was when he was the one needed to save the day! He caught Lily falling the cliff, he garded Pietro's window, he killed the vampires attacking Reasa... And now, he has a child under his wings, and he takes this responsability very seriously. Everybody fears him, but not Pippa, she knows that he will take care of her. He is gentle with her, he knows how to talk to her. He is as much a Gardian as his father, and would be as much a carer as his mother if he could get the right opportunities. He always was the only one that had no sibbling or cousin to care for. They all were in pairs except him, he was the odd one.
I think that to make peace with himself, Kothari needs to be acknowledged as a guardian, be it of the pack, of Pippa, of a second child Gard and Rayne could have, of Annie's and Caleb's baby, or his own! He could be wonderful as beta to Kallum, as big brother, mentor, head of security, and yes, as a mate and father.
A_Stoneover 6 years agoFor those who are binge reading like me, I have commented on like the past three chapters lol but I can’t help it!
Kothari is gonna be a daddy! Who would have thought?! Agony is the perfect bad guy cuz I love him and hate him all in one. When the bad guys are too one dementional it gets boring, but Agony is so multilayered I feel like I learn more about him each chapter.
As for Caleb and Annie, if you just moved on from them, then the connection between the past and present would be lost. I’ve seen some haters but I truly love them. It’s hard to give each pairing the attention they deserve and I think you have done a beautiful job so far!
On a side note, please ave Dante and Joshua mate with some of our girls!
Anonymousover 6 years agoI just hope this doesn't mean u have stopped this series. If that's the case please put us out of this misery!!! Still waiting for ur next chapter(s)!!!
