All Comments on 'Storm-tossed Lovers'

Very good. Enjoyed your characters and hope you'll continue the story!

Enjoyed your story but in the interest of brevity you had to accelerate the activity. However, I surmise that you have no real experience in weathering a hurricane.

The naturalist descriptions come across as a bit cringeworthy and pretentious, especially when laid out in speech.

Veers a bit into purple prose territory.