All Comments on 'Storm World Ch. 02'

I'm looking forward to reading more. Thankyou once again for a great chapter. Easily worth 5 stars...

I really love this universe u created. The detail to the story is great. I look forward to lot more. Thank you for sharing this great story.

So glad to see you back again, love your stories 😊

Love your writing

The cats, that is. Rawr.

Your writing is good. As usual. The human is nuts. I am surprised that he didn't notice the tails. You did a good job of setting up the castaway theme - the jungle, the cave; it feels distinctly primitive, although you made a point of the tech that was scattered around the cave. I suspect that the setting is not going to change in the story's foreseeable future, unless something forces them out of the cave.

You're on to an old story format, here; castaways that first have to survive three stages - each other, the environment, and then (at least in the last story of yours I read) an outside threat. You make the characters likable. You write reasonable reactions and actions - and backgrounds - for them. You are on a roll. Keep it up.

GLAD YOU ARE BACK...... I love you stories....thank you for sharing your time and imagination with us

RipperFish,

Please keep writing! I really enjoy this new series. Thank you.

Please don't feel pressure to write for any of us, your work is great and we are happy to read it again, but if you need a break just take one. Some writers burn out and I would hate to see that happen to you.

It's really great to have you back and writing. It'll be a joy following you through this adventure and I can't wait to see where you take us.

Thanks for sharing.

I am glad your back and cant wait to see what your great mind come up with. You have to be one of my favorite writes on here

Thank you for continuing writing , I have thoroughly enjoyed your writing.

I very much enjoyed your previous work and was very pleasantly surprised to see you had started a new project. I find the idea of a cat-like species very appealing and so am happy that you have continued in this universe. I look forward to the stories with some of the original characters. You do a great job of character development and you are defining these new ones deftly as well. I wish the names were less complicated so hopefully you will introduce simple 'nicknames' over time. Along with everyone else I welcome you back.

Enjoying this one, but man are the names somewhat difficult to follow.

The names are the most difficult thing for me to work out. I went ahead and made a text file to try to keep it straight - any chance you can proof my work?

Commander M'peth qHo is a female Thahn 'Den Intelligence Officer

Chep 'Urt vEss is a male ? gunner

Es'tl Mei qHa is a male - Dying from wounds

Ima' Nef'Tn is a female dTel'Qohar weapons officer

Liat 'del Qha is a female Pah'Tht Pilot

Pei'r aMa Lii is a female dTel'Qohar Engineer

TaH 'Kiy mTh is a male Thahn 'Den Engineer

Tem l'eth tong is a female ? ?

Ty'em P'tral is a female Thahn 'Den ?

Vil tIIen Mi is a female Thahn 'Den Tactical Officer

Looking forward to more of Benjamin's reaction, gotta love

"I've had enough," and

"Night-night, imaginary kitty,"

LMAO!

Jason