All Comments on 'Storm World Ch. 09'

Ignore that annon dude, I really enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work.

dont let the whiners bother you it has been a great story if they dont like it they dont have to read it but the vast majority off us that do love your work

Sorry that you had to deal with a troll, but keep up the good work. I suppose I could guess at what might bother someone, but sometimes a story method or language or plot thar challenges you is also what helps make it great. And that goes for the reader and the author.

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your stories. This is another great chapter and very easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

I wonder if that troll of yours is the same one who sent me an email after a positive comment I made about a story, not one of yours but a good story none the less. He told me I didn't know anything about a relationship between a man and a woman and obviously had trouble understanding what I had read. He or she said I needed to put my teeth back in and read the story again so I could understand it better. Where was he when I was in college? That advice would have been invaluable back then.

You have to know you are doing something right when the name calling starts. It's irritating to have to put up with that stuff but maybe his Mommy will bring him a hot pocket and some hot chocolate down to the basement and he can chill out.

That said, I really enjoy your stories. They are well thought out, well written and have just the right amount of sex and action/adventure in them to hold anyone's interest. Thank you for sharing, looking forward to the next installment.

Pappy

i agree with all of the other comments, some people are just dumb. I have read all of your works and we have exchanged emails before. That being said keep up the great work. Alas i wish it were all done so i could read all of it at one time but i am willing to wait....... You have a great story going. Great job too bad I cant give you 10 stars....

Gary

Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent with us!

A very welcome surprise, I was not expecting this chapter so soon. And thank you for sharing your work with the readers of Lit.

Thanks for the read! It's good to know that you are back at it...I feel really bad about that rude jerk and I hope you won't ever receive those kinds of messages again! Anyways 5/5 stars. Can't wait for the next one!

I ENJOY YOUR STORIES, THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR WORLDS WITH

US,,,,,,,,,,,

PEOPLE THAT COMPLAIN ARE WASTING AIR THAT OTHERS COULD USE.......

IF THEY DON'T LIKE WHAT THEY READ..... WHY ARE THEY STILL READING

THE STORY???????????? EITHER MOVE ON, OR WRITE A STORY THEMSELF.

GUNRUNNER

C.R. CRIBBS

(CHARLIE)

MAJOR, USMC

SNIPER/SCOUT

A surprise, but a nice one I must add. Good job on the story so far, can't wait for more!

Great story (ies). Looking forward to the next installment. Keep them coming please. Hope you keep investing in the arc. I love your work.

Thank you for sharing it

Brilliant, lots more please.

If people cannot give appropiate critiscim, and just make sad excuse, use rude language etc, dont give them any time. With that out the way, great chapter, someone must explain Benjamin about monogamy with the cats LOL... that engineer guy will be a troublesome in the future.

Your pace is great and takes us to the places you describe with ease...as always you don´t drown us in rhetoric and keep us wishing for more with each installment...glad to see you´re feeling good enough to crank out another chapter for us RF...take care and Thank You again for your submissions, Peace and Health bro...

A well constructed story, thoroughly enjoyable throughout. I like the style and balance of content. All 9 chapters read and enjoyed, can't wait for the subsequent ones! Thank you for your efforts

I really like the pace of the story and look forward to more of it. Thanks!

Love this stuff and am looking forward to the next chapter. If you haven't already considered it I would definitely purchase a kindle format version of this story and you other work.

Favorite chapter so far. Professional level writing, as always. For my sanity though, please don't delay too long on getting the next chapter out. I don't think I can handle another 2-month gap.

thank you for this latest chapter every one slowly builds upon the next part in the story. I appreciate your style of writing and imagination. please ignore the trolls they only act to make themselves seem more than their pathetic existence warrents.

RF, you are a very accomplished writer. I anticipate the next chapters and will read them as soon as you update. Thanks again.

Your writing is still as totally awesome as I've come to expect. Looking forward to more. Are you adding definitions to the forum as you go? It's nice to be able to find them in one place. An email implies a level of personal, it's not public like comments or forum no reason to accept anonymous.

I absolutely love how you handled him. Kudos to you: not only can you write, you know a smack talker from a someone who has good intentions.

Don't let that jerk get to you

Probably just some clown who's jealous of your writing