All Comments on 'Stormwatch - A Blizzard in Buffalo'

Exceptionally well done! Would give it six stars if possible!

Love a good love story. Broken people repairing one another. It would have been good to have explained her possessions on her desk after Effy rescued her from her car. Was that a suicide attempt?

Well you surpassed yourself with that tale, brill

Lovely story. Do you plan on extending it? Hope so if you do.

Fantastic story. Sweet and hot!

I grew up in Western NY—also fun to think about the area and those epic snowstorms too!

I knew it, I knew it! I knew a longer story from you would great! I loved them both, and everybody else you write about in your submissions. They all feel real, as if I’ve met them before. You’re so good at that!

An excellent story. It’s the first I’ve read of yours. Will read others. The only question I have is what was the meaning of her leaving her pocketbook, car starter fob, and other items but taking fob to unlock car? was she that depressed that she wanted to freeze to death. There is a long way from being lonely to be wanting to die. Need sequel to uncover these truths Gear writing

Nice story! very sweet and very hot and also very Believable! Some of the stories here are so off-the-wall unrealistic that ti's difficult to suspend one's disbelief enough to enjoy them. not this one It's a keeper!

Cheers!

Good story!

4

Believable. Erotic. Nicely paced. Good length. Pushed many of my buttons! Thank you!

Really good story even though the whole stuck in a blizzard thing is something of a cliché, that said two lonely, damaged people deserve a break and a HEA. I’d like to understand why she was sat in her car without the key fob (unlocked?) with a two thousand yard stare, it’s indicative of mental trauma etc, setting aside the self-centred partners and voluntary transactional hook ups there was nothing in the story to indicate why she’d retreat into herself in a situation like that?

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Loved Effigy's description -- big cock, pubic hair, hairy chest, and real devotion to Veronica! Please write more about them!

Just re-read the story!

5

Beautiful. Hot. Romantic. You want these characters to be very happy, and even "ever after". Perfect story.

Love those storms! And five stars for the tale.

Wonderful stormy tale. They did a great job minding the store and each other during the Blizzard. Five stars, and Thankyou for it.

Excellent story, They did an excellent job making sure the server farm ran smoothly.

This one has been sitting in my read later list since you published it. It got buried under other later entries. I'm so glad that I made myself go and sift to the very bottom of the pile for something good to read.

I should want to complain about the occasionally strange tense constructions, but I don’t want to because you make them work just fine.

I should want to complain that a relationship of such depth comes out of left field, but I don’t, because you give a rich, understandable explanation.

I should want to complain the all that rich explanation comes a little late in the story for it to be absolutely effective, but…

Yeah. I’m gonna complain about that one. Sue me.

That’s the only thing keeping me from painting a physical little yellow star on my phone screen, since Laurel won’t let us assign six stars any other way.