All Comments on 'Stormy Affair'

All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited sex while mommy helps.

The dialogue is unreal, almost childish. One example of many lame sentences: "Mom I know it's weird, but I think if daddy and I did that when a storm was around, it would finally help me deal with my fear." Very disappointing.

If I were worried about realism , I wouldn't read adult literature! Sexy and fun, keep on writing!

But where was the cuckold? Glad I didn't see the tags first because would never read a cuckold story.

Also, where was the accident? Daughter planned the sex, no accident there.

When you say bigger than average boobs, I assume you meant asian boobs. B cups are not big by other standards.

Nicely written.

Bravo. I read a lot of these stories and I was very entertained. I love the anolog version of a dick emoji, super classy.

Thank you for making me smile.

Respectfully

K.N. Adler

Xoxo 💋

This is 1 of the worst stories I've read on here. As the other stated childish dialogue seriously unexciting sex scene and extremely boring. I know this is an erotic fiction site but damn.!!!!! This 2as awful

Not worth a star

DragonRider55

I only came across ( pardon the pun ) your stories a couple of days ago someone had recommended them , I am so glad they did I will be reading through the whole catalog over the coming days

I liked it for what it was. A nice story that allows for readers thoughts. It’s not gone with the wind but it wasn’t the worst. Keep writing and I’ll keep reading

Reminded me of when my daughter would come into bed and snuggle against me and when I got aroused she would play with me

You say it's based on truth, makes you and this story pathetic. Just make up your stories and put effort into them, unlike this half ass attempt to satisfy chronic masterbaters.

a very happy family