All Comments on 'Story 01: Our Conjugal Amorousness'

by Mahir

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Obsessive_LesbianObsessive_Lesbianover 12 years ago
Brilliant work!

I love your style of portraying the profile of this couple (that's my style too) with some info on wife's attire, and proceeding through the erotically depicted storyline. I wish you good luck for your future posts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent!

I wanna read more from you.

Rachel

Romania

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow!

The narration needs to be more detailed. However the entire preamble of characters makes your story different from others and the sex scene is ravishing. Keep up to write and best of luck for stories to come.

Paul Bremers, USA

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Is this writer stupid ??

Yes ! 1* stupid.

Anonymous
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