by Mahir
I love your style of portraying the profile of this couple (that's my style too) with some info on wife's attire, and proceeding through the erotically depicted storyline. I wish you good luck for your future posts.
The narration needs to be more detailed. However the entire preamble of characters makes your story different from others and the sex scene is ravishing. Keep up to write and best of luck for stories to come.
Paul Bremers, USA