All Comments on 'Story Time'

by MollyBloom1904

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
lame

oh yeah, what a loving act - to her husband? not!

so she screws him over, the man she gave her vows and her body to, and romantizes her affair with another.

MacDukeMacDukeabout 18 years ago
Wanting

You write very well. Your stories are filled with wanting and erotic tension. You should now venture out into a real experience, in story if not in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Inhibitions Allow Fantasy / Marriage Contracts

need to be voided if you wish to take it further.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A brief thought

"It's better to have lived the experience rather than regret what you may have never known" X

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