All Comments on 'Stowaway Monsters Ch. 02'

Both parts where fantastic, almost makes me want a third.

But everything came to a good conclusion so i am happy to give you the five stars that this story deservs.

i loved the first part , thrilled with the second . i'm trans scary coming out to my awesome wife but yet to tell my family . well done. thank you so much.

This so well written and your character development is first class, have you thought of a sequel? I think its possible to now follow them through the first few years of their life together. Well done five stars and wish there were more than five to award.

I have never been so enthralled by a story on here before. I loved the characters, the romance and drama. Absolutely perfect, keep writing. You have a dedicated fan here waiting for more

Good story but it all seemed rushed...

I haven't really thought about a sequal that would follow their life together, only because I wanted their story to be about their struggles and overcoming it together. But if I ever have the inspiration to continue their story, for sure. Or if more request it.

I thought it might feel rushed, but I hoped the pace would be gauged a bit with the dialogue so that the readers could atleast understand where the development was coming from. I completely understand that the pace was unsatisfactory

Have read all your stories and has been great to see you develop as an author. You bring a lot out in your characters, and with only some minor spelling mistakes. Hope you do come back. But if you don’t. Glad to have shared what you have so far.

Just finished reading both chapters and I enjoyed them immensely. I like all the stories you've posted. Keep writing Mars_Inamorata, you have the talent for it.

Great story. You write very well the emotional issues. Fun that comment in the taste not being like described in books. Nice ending. Write more stories please. Thank you

Thrilled to have found these stories have pretty much loved them all. Was delightfully surprised this one actually had a true end with them getting married. Some say the "happily ever after" is dumb and unrealistic but if we loose faith in even fiction I feel the world truly has lost hope.

A great story, very well told. And beautiful sex scenes too.

A good story!