All Comments on 'Straight Turnout'

I keep rereading and rereading this story an keep cummmmmming with Jamie and Mr Goodlong

This was awesome! You rock at this! 💋💋💋

This story is amazingly funny and sexy at the same!

Lord this was sooooooo hot! Wish I was in the car with them

the story was great remimed me how i got turned out by my wife making me have sex with a gay friend of hers after he got done fucking my ass made me a gay buttslut

This is a fantasy come true. I dreamed of having a hot blowjob I was giving turn into a hot fucking.

Fucking awesome story. I wish I was Jamie. And to echo others, you absolutely should write more adventures of Mr. Goodlong. Maybe Jamie should look him up and get more of that amazing cock, and Mr G should turn out more guys at his new job.

Love this story, I've read it several times and each time there's been a need for a "cleanup on aisle 4." I wish I was Jamie. My cock is not big enough to be Mr. Goodlong.

I agree with everyone who wants a prequel and a sequel. I'd love to hear about Jamie coming back for more. Finding Mr. Goodlong at some new job and how he turned our Nancy's husband.

I’m sorry, this story was way better than it had any right to be. It was sexy as hell. Well-written. It was also intermittently hilarious, with a climax that really puts the “screw” in “screwball comedy”. And it had a twist ending?? The reveal that Rod’s coworker has a grudge because he had turned her husband gay… I was like, surprised to see character motivation beyond just sex on this site haha. The part when Becca is trying to keep her boyfriend from turning gay by showing her breasts made me laugh. Also the part where Rod cums on everyone as his boss fires him: amazing. Anyway for a story where a dude gets straight up raped this made me smile a lot

it would be fun to be Jamie!

It was a very hot story.

In place of Mr. Lay, I wouldn't have fired Rod. I would have given him a chance to correct his mistake. Like as bottom ... :)

This is my favorite story on here! I love it!

I loved the story but never like the presence of a female friend or girlfriend. Otherwise,?the sexual act was perfect.

The story was amazing

I'll echo the same as the critic who posted a month before I: Not a fan of str8 convert stories when there's a girlfriend being cheated on.

As a Dom Master there is something special about turning a straight boy either bi or gay as the longer he serves me then the more gay he becomes as some end up sissy crossdressers / trannies as it even a special thrill when the husband sets it up for me to be the bull for his wife and she conspires to see him suck cock as supposedly one of her biggest fantasies and i turn him to being a downlow cock hound as one couple ended up she became his mistress and he was her sissy bitch and another time the couple ended up as side by side cumslut bitches both being fucked by me and my friends as entertainment while we watched sports and took out our aggressions in their respective holes while they were both tied up next to each other

somewhat humorous but very stimulating and exciting. It brought to mind what really happened to me

It was all the hotter for having some humor woven into the story. I wish there were further adventures of Jamie and Mr. Goodlong. (I'm a bottom.)

Would like to read a follow on with mr. Goodlong Jamie and becca like who they got together and started a partnership and took there on to porn wed site

Didn't quite like the story, but Becca really got what she deserved. She used Jamie all along, just right that it backfired finally.

Loved this story. Hot and funny at the same time. I was wishing it was me on the receiving end of that huge 12" cock. I love bottoming and feeling hot cum exploding deep in me.

"Mr Goodlong", so fucking stupid! 🙄

Read it before...erotic humor of the first rank...

Mmmm Mr Goodlong turn me out and make me a cock addict!

Wow!

Loved it what a lucky man i will keep reading lol Rossco65 from Australia.

Hey good story, I liked it. Minus the girlfriend and his boss, it was the same old guy fucking my ass the first time but on his couch, I was powerless but glad I "let him" do me.

Really got hot filthy story. One of my instant favorites, especially with this theme! Very much appreciated the temporal flow. Starting with the dicking and then fading back in time to explain how said dicking came to be, was a great structure to hook the reader and assure them this isn't some love story, while also discreetly pulling them into the different dynamics of the characters in the plot. Really well done, encore.

Damn ,I am hot and horny after that story.Need a stiff dick in my mouth.

Great writing. Tremendously exciting fuck scene. Lucky Jamie!!!

Absolutely love this story. Wish you would continue it !!

Can we get a second encounter between Mr. Goodlong and Jamie?

This makes me think about how I got fucked my first time. After watching Paul suck my dick at the club I was following him to his house. I started wondering what a dick taste like. As soon as we get there Paul has me strip naked to walk in the house. We get inside he strip naked and sitting down in a chair. I walked over dropped down on my knees and started sucking up Paul cock. My dick got rock hard. Paul notice and ask if won’t to fuck him. Yeah I said as we get to Paul bed he got on all fours. Six inches away from his ass I shot cum all over his ass!!! He said it’s ok let’s 69 and you get on top. I stalted him and went back to sucking him and started cresses my ass !! As he started giving me a rimmjob! I mouned with pleasure. Ten minutes later he ask if he could fuck me ??? I thought if his toung felt that good surely his dick might be better. Soon his 7 inches of cock was balls deep in my tight ass!! He had maid into a bottom as he kept fucking me and it felt so good after he finished 20 minutes later I was sucking him hard again. He asked me do you want me to fuck your ass some baby?? I stop looking up and saying yes. After we fucked the second time!!!! He to order me to save my body and told me I was gonna be his bottom for six months!!! I be sucking his dick letting him fuck me when ever he said!!!! I’ve been bisexual for 28 years now and still prefer bottom

It was awesome!!! First time I’ve gotten off from a gay fucking story!!!!

I need to find that car lot lol.

This such a good story! It's the only one I've read that is guaranteed to make me come so hard. I know if Mr Goodlong was long dicking me I'd be rock hard too! We need to know what happens to Jamie next now his cock last has been awakened.

I loved how his partner saw him getting taken by a lovely big cock and was powerless to stop him being tuned by it! I would love my wife Rhian to find me being taken hard by a BBC whilst wearing her lingerie! As I see her watch I'd beg for the guy to empty himself inside me and as he did I'd spurt without touching myself! She would know things would never be the same again!

The story was great. Funny how the first time with a cock, there’s this bit of hesitancy. During my first, I was with this man who was very nice, and knew exactly what to do. I had agreed to sleep with him in a hotel room, and at the time was more curious than anything. Ok, so he did manage to get my clothes off, and had this incredible hungry look on his face when he saw my virginal ass. I wasn’t quite sure I was ready, but when he put the head of his hard cock right where I could feel him before entry, I realized how nice cock was. He didn’t want to force himself, and told me to relax or he wasn’t going in. Oh, at that moment I knew how much I wanted him and here’s the irony I certainly did not want him to pull away. In fact to myself I was shouting “FUCK ME DADDY, FUCK ME”. He stretched me a little at first, but I found myself quickly riding up and down on his cock, loving it, and loving him. Needless to say, and although it was my first time, and to his surprise, I very enjoyably did most of the work

oh wow ....i've been sucking men off for a long time but never gave up my ass....i've been wanting too for a long time . I've want to give up my cherry and become a more complete gay bottom I am now rready , this primal taking of Bobby ass has inspired me to make it happen ....take me I'm yours !

LMAO turn him out. Great story.

Hope to be turned out like that myself one day…. Definitely inspiring

This story is so hot it made my cock hard and I am dripping pre cum now. Never had a man in me yet.

wow wish i had my second in my ass that big and full of cum.

No panties for the twink?