All Comments on 'Stranded'

Please feel free to continue this story, I would love to hear about the waterfall. You are an excellent writer and I look forward to reading your contributions.

I felt like I was in that cave, stranded with Tess. This was very cool. Thank you.

Enjoyed this very much..please continue on with the story!

well, first off let me say that this was a good story and did succeed in getting me hot during the sex scene. one thing though, is the lack of sentence structure. sometimes you just used too many simple sentences without any kind of varied sentence around them. at times it could be a little distracting. and another thing is during the sex scene it would have been nice to see what the characters were thinking, what was really going on in their heads. at least from tess (seeing as how the story was from her pov). it started off great, but the above mentioned kinda took off from the effect. i still love your stories and i just wanna help in any way i can.

It was a lovely idea to have Tess and Max find themselves in a cave overnight on a storm-swept mountainside surrounded on the outside by beautiful Aussie scenery (evidenced by the kookaburra call) and inside the cave, a sort of primaeval wombness which makes me think that a 'call of the wild' must have been part of what got the two of them so quickly entangled in a passionate rooting ;). By 'call of the wild' I mean one as deep as perhaps 50 - 100 thousand years for those of us with cave-dwelling ancestors, but perhaps the depth of the wild calling is more than any of us can imagine. I like the depth in your stories __Li sa__

I love how some of your stories are so simple and as you tend to put it--- "lazy". Its very laid back, no pun intended, and makes for a very relaxing yet very arousing story. Great for just before bed because it doesn't make me absolutely wanton, but it takes the edge off. Thank you again. ;)

So good.

I just read, "Stranded." Five stars all the way, Girl. You deserve every five star vote that you get.

Luke