All Comments on 'Stranded'

Yeah, the dad joining in was a let down for me.

Too early for the son to fuck his mom in the ass. But anyway already happened.

The four of them could go back to that deserted beach and have a family orgy.

Might have been a fun story if it weren't simply another of a long line of worn out plots,

not much more than same old same old. Frankly I was disappointed, you've done better.

A lot of love, a little force and complete acceptance! Like father like son, like mother like daughter, Lol!

First sex doable. Then anal and 69 after that. Please. Then the sister and brother. Not to mention the father. *

A bit of a hot mess. But, HOT indeed.

Gotta love them outer banks! Duck to Hatteras!

In terms of smut, it's got it all and the sex is fairly well written from the point of view of the narrator. But the problem is that it's just ridiculous. If he's a virgin this long, chances are that he would have been far too nervous to just make a quick move on his mom. And then it seemed like you were just checking off boxes. Dick-in-pussy? Check. Anal? Check. 69? Check? Random anal sex with the sister? Check. Even more random Dad fucks all of the sister's holes? Check, check, and check.

It's okay to take a moment and let a story breathe. It doesn't have to be a porn movie that goes from one scene to the next. You are a good writer. Let the story build.

Perhaps if they had used the flare that was in the boat for just such emergencies, they would have been saved earlier.

Not sure how many phones, even smart phones, would work after being dunked in sea water.

This wasn't sexy at all, just funny as hell. Got to love a nonsensical story for its sheer entertainment value. I hope you wrote this with tongue in cheek.

I hope there's another episode where they all get together in one bed,

I did enjoy this story

Rape and anal - not my cup of tea.

It would be nice to have an incest story without anal. Obviously a favorite of yours

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