All Comments on 'Stranded in the Cabin'

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Mazikeen666Mazikeen666over 2 years ago

Great story, loved reading every part! Any chance for a sequel? Please keep writing!

AngstIgnoredAngstIgnoredover 2 years ago

Day 0? Written by a computer programmer?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
wonderful

Stranded in the Cabin is a wonderful love story, with excellent characters that really come alive to the reader. The romantic atmosphere pervades throughout, and the plot moves at a pace that is never too rushed or to slow. The writing is also excellent; this is the sort of story that is all too rare on the site. Five stars

Grail1223Grail1223over 2 years ago

Great story. While it wasn't a major issue, if you set a story in the US, you should probably use american terms. Takeaway and jumper or very much british terms and nobody in Denver would use them.

666bent666bentover 2 years ago

An excellent well considered story in every regard; its only fault was to end a story that needs to continue. These two need more adventures together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I had to reload pages 2-7 to see them. This is happening more often with this new format. Never happened with the old format.

jlg07jlg07over 2 years ago

I would love to see a follow on to this

mac1729mac1729over 2 years ago

Good story and I too would love to see a follow up

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

He needs to find her, who wouldn't want to get snowed in with a woman like Kiera. Very enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely loved the story. Hated the ending. It was five stars all the way, but I could only give you four.. I was hoping when he went into his apartment she would be waiting for him. I was disappointed.

tangledweedtangledweedover 2 years ago

A nice little romance with some fun THC infused sex. The thing I missed, though, was why they had to part like a couple of married cheaters off of a one night stand?

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Great story! A follow up would be nice.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I second story follow up would be. Awesome I gave a 4 but ya know he has her brothers number from calling the iPad just look into the history and he can find her 😉

DrkmanDrkmanover 2 years ago

I kind wish you'd have another chapter. Maybe he used the iPAD to find her then they could hook up again. Maybe this time with the risk of pregnancy or he decided to put a ring on her. Ideas but hope there is another chapter of their life.

DINGDONG33DINGDONG33over 1 year ago

I am at a lost not sure if I liked the way this story ended, but you left it open for a sequel. Wish you could have her appear for Christmas or let their friendship grow. But that was an great story and was well written. Thank you for your story.

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

A truly beautiful story with a crap ending. The resolution was sad and very unsatisfying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Need another chapter! Loved the story but the ending was depressing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This dumb shit will be looking for closer for along time, great story of an older generation.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Would have been interesting to see if they had anything in common besides sex and weed. Ending definitely sucked.

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