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All Comments on 'Stranded in the Parking Lot'

by JuliaHandel

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guysimple1674guysimple1674about 11 years ago
Too short

The build up is nice,but its too short. You should get more details for an independent building up story, or get into the action.

xxPAPERBACKWRITERxxxxPAPERBACKWRITERxxover 10 years ago
Leave them begging for more.

LIT readers have a tough time filling the holes with their imaginations. They always demand National Park Service guided tours.

5 stars, Good job.

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