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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
❤❤❤❤❤

The wife is a keeper.

The husband has a very very strong voyeur side,

of which he is not fully aware as yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

:-)

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
Agree stupid wimpy Cucky

Minority with loud voices

No real man puts up with that shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Excellent story, too bad it was never finished.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very very ETOTIC. REALISTIC too.

❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0=100%)!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Readers either LOVE or HATE this story. I love it, gave it a 5 (*****).

In my book this story is EROTIC, reasonably REALISTIC, & in a strange way, even ROMANTIC - all in one!

Lisa is a keeper. Period.

Lisa is a keeper. Period.

Lisa's husband's indecision is caused by his inner conflict: (a) he is jealous (whoch he is already aware of) ; & (b) he has that kinky desire to see his wife groped, & may be even fucked, by his neighbor Ron. He is not aware as yet of his kinky side but it is there & it affects his decision making process already.

If you are into husband-watches-wife stories,

you won't go wrong if you read this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOVE IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0=100%)! Bravo, PTremer. The story line was very imaginatively conceived & masterfully written. In my book, Lisa is a keeper in spite of everything that took place in course of the strange afternoon...

This story has so far got 323,810 views (including 92 favorites),

which is 0.28 fav. per 1K views.

Excerpt from the story follows:

Just minutes ago, I thought Lisa would slap him for getting a little fresh and now she is teasing him relentlessly.

I don't know how far she will let him go, and I am not sure I want to find out. The wine is making her very bold.

[Really priceless!]

racfguyracfguyover 3 years ago
What the hell

is wrong with the husband? He needs to go give Ron a few kicks in the balls. Ron is no friend.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

★★★★★+ [5+ (5.25/5=105% "above expectations"!)] This story turned me on.

It can be very very kinky when another man caresses your wife's body before your very eyes and you can tell she enjoys it. It happened to me more than once in my first marriage. Knowing what i know now, what I witnessed was just the tip of the iceberg.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

💚💚💚💚💚+ (5+)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

In spite of everything that took place that day, Lisa is a keeper.

Badwolf8015Badwolf8015almost 3 years ago

This type of thing happened to me and my wife with my best friend lol. I stopped it just before they looked like they was going to fuck. I gave my wife that guilt trip the next day when I asked her what all that was about and showed her and knickers that have been ripped off and ask her to explain. He said he was a bit of fun remember nothing what happened he's your best friend. I got my own back a few weeks later I'm biting his wife loud got her very drunk and return the favour and he wasn't there but my wife . She never did it again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Did he ever get the fuckin bet on?????????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

EXCELLENT. LOVED IT.

I gave you a 5.0 = 100% (☆☆☆☆☆!)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm copy pasting an earlier public comment.

"Anonymous - 4 months ago

★★★★★+ [5+ (5.25/5=105% "above expectations"!)] This story turned me on.

It can be very very kinky when another man caresses your wife's body before your very eyes and you can tell she enjoys it.

It happened to me more than once in my first marriage..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very erotic and/or kinky: ★★★★★ (5.0)! I saw myself in the character of Lisa's husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is an excellent wife sex story. It is very erotic and totally true to life*. I really really loved it, gave it a 5+ (5.5 = 110%, ★★★★★+)!

________

* My wife was sober as a judge when she got caressed or groped at a big party on a huge property a number of years ago. It was a casual party, she wore daisy dukes and a cropped top.

I had made a stop at the resthroom and proceeded to get us drinks. When i was coming back, the guy who was sitting beside her was wispering something in her ear while he was caressing her bare thighs, starting at the knee and all the way to the rim of her shorts. She could not see me.

Nothing in my life had prepared me for such a situation. I froze; was unable to think, let alone act; i felt it all was happening to so.ebody else. I was totally mesmerized, was in a hypnotic trance of sorts. I knew it wasn't but it felt like an out-of-body experience.

I decided to approach them so she could see me. I looked at my wife and found her very very sexy.

I never told my wife that I saw her.

My brain managed to temporarily push that mamory onto the "back burner."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

❤, 👍👍! My kind of wife sex story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love ❤ it!

This is one of the best wife sex stories on Literotica.

It is intensely erotic and 100% true to life.

I am copy pasting another user's comment:

(Quote:) Lecheman - over 10 years ago

Highly Erotic

As previous comments I am equally curious as to the second part of this story.

I liked it. I found it to have a provocative and sensual approach and has definitely left me panting for the sequel.

Well done! (End quote.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

LOVE ❤ it! Rated it "A+ above expectations"!

If you are into voyeur husband scenarios, this story is a MUST READ.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

An excerpt from page 2 of the story.

Quote:

... Lisa follows through with a slap to his shoulder causing him to roll over on his back. She quickly straddles him and takes both his wrists and pushes them over his head. Her breasts are brushing his face as she says something harsh.

Holding his wrist, she drags her breast from side to side over his face, only the thin material between her nipples and his mouth. He catches one nipple and begins to suck it through the fabric.

Lisa closes her eyes and leans her head back in enjoyment at the same time she begins to grind herself against him.

I watch this scene in amazement trying to decide what to do.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story turned me on very very much.

It is kinky, romantic, and even poetic, when your friend is step-by-step seducing your drunk wife. He is caressing her, groping her, and spenking her. You hope that she will say "OK, that's it," but you realize she is ready to go that extra step. You rush to the scene to intervene before she gets fucked because you are fully aware she is horny and drunk and wants to have sex with your friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT):

"... I am so mesmerized by the sight of Ron spanking Lisa that without thinking, I struggle with my zipper to free my rock hard erection. My shorts are already damp, a combination of sweat and my cock oozing."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Next part needed for sure. Husband finally came to his right mind walks out Rick's bastard in the nuts throws him off his property. Tells his wife to pack and go to her mommy and daddy. Just as she walks in the house their teenage children was in the kitchen getting a snake. They had just got home. They asked mom what was going on? She was crying and ran to the bedroom. They did work things out. The neighbor did move.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lisa is a keeper. Full stop. End of story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

5.0 = 💯% (💜💙💚💛❤) 👍👍!

alliehot007alliehot007about 2 years ago

quite a interesting story i thought...naughty ron

DrkmanDrkmanabout 2 years ago

Damn, don't stop now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story is very very erotic, and true to life, two-in-one.

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤❤!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I'm copy pasting an earlier comment which I totally agree with.

Quote:

Anonymous, 5 months ago

This story turned me on very very much.

"It is kinky, romantic, and even poetic, when your friend is step-by-step seducing your drunk wife. He is caressing her, groping her, and spenking her. You hope that she will say "OK, that's it," but you realize she is ready to go that extra step. You rush to the scene to intervene before she gets fucked because you are fully aware she is horny and drunk and wants to have sex with your friend.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I LOVE this story, gave it a 5 (☆☆☆☆☆).

It has got 353.6k views and 131 comments as of June 24/22. Literotica users have never stopped posting comments.

I dare say this story is popular.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I really liked where the story was except he came out of the house so now I'm really curious.

My question is why haven't you continued the story its the second time I've read it the first time I think was over a year ago?

emsoneemsonealmost 2 years ago

Go ahead and finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That is no way to end the story "TO BE CONTINUED" Bull shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lisa wanted to be fucked.

He husband was not sure what he wanted; he obsessively enjoyed watching the foreplay but he knew that should Ron's prick penetrate Lisa that act could never be undone.

PS: I would say Lisa is ready to have a fling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

LOVE IT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am copy pasting the following comment:

"Anon, almost 2 years ago

Readers either LOVE or HATE this story. I love it, gave it a 5 (*****).

In my book this story is EROTIC, reasonably REALISTIC, & in a strange way, even ROMANTIC - all in one.

Lisa is a keeper. Period.

Lisa is a keeper. Period.

Her husband's indecision is caused by his inner conflict: (a) he is jealous (whoch he is already aware of) ; & (b) he has that kinky desire to see his wife groped, & may be even fucked, by his neighbor Ron. He is not aware as yet of his kinky side but it is there & it affects his decision making process already.

If you are into husband-watches-wife stories,

you won't go wrong if you read this one."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜) 👍👍!

Lisa has the hots for Ron. She enjoyed his company and got drunk.

Ron is the guy who playes for keeps.

Lisa's husband has a prominent voyeur side; his voyeur side prevened him from intervening sooner.

Lisa is a keeper. Full stop. Period.p

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I have read this unfinished story at least 3 times in the last 18 months with the thought you would of finished it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

EXCEĹLENT!

Gave you a 5.0 = 100% (☆☆☆☆☆).

The story is very very erotic, and totally true to life, two-in-one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5.0), ❤❤!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A tour de force.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) 👍👍!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is an EXCELLENT story: ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0).

Excerpt from the story.

Quote:

I am so mesmerized by the sight of Ron spanking Lisa that without thinking, I struggle with my zipper to free my rock hard erection. My shorts are already damp, a combination of sweat and my cock oozing.

I can't take my eyes off Lisa's firm ass; her skin is red from the repeated slaps. The expression on her face is pure lust, I've seen this look before and know it must stop; I start for the door but stop again. My curiosity has taken over.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

🙈 "... seen nothing"

🙉 "... heard nothing"

🙊 "... said nothing"

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

For the record, posting under anonymous doesn't stop intelligent people from recognizing comments from the same individual. I'm guessing the "author" is pretty insecure and padding their comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

neede to get on with it

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanover 1 year ago

These guys that just sit and watch or clean spilled coffee, while their wife cheats or is molested ffs. I would have grabbed a bat and given Ron a shot in the head for every slap if he dies he dies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a FIVE STAR STORY.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A tour de force.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY, (spoilet alert!)

"I don't know what to do now, this has gone so far that I need to stop it, but at the same time, I also want to watch this show."

A FIVE STAR STORY!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY (spoiler alert!)

"I don't know what to do now, this has gone so far that I need to stop it, but at the same time, I also want to watch this show."

Above scene is totally REALISTIC.

Years ago, I was in a similar situation: i watched my wife and a very good griend of mine sitting by the pool; he was caressing her thighs under the pretext he was aplying the sunscreen lotion. The moment he started to caress my wife's inner thighs sent me to a mild hypnotic trance which rendered me unable to think clearly let alone to intervene. My mind was foggy. I knew I was not experiencing an out-of-body episode, but it did feel like that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

In my book this is an exvrllent wife sex story; I gave it a 5 of 5 (♡♡♡♡♡)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

In spite of everythig we have read aboit Lisa, she is still a keeper. Her husband loves her not only "truly, madky, deeply" but also "selflessly & unconditipnally."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why part 2 Friend takes advantage of us. He may of slammed the door coming out, but what if the friend was a much better gambler at reading the husband and his wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So hot 🔥 5 stars 🌟

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I AM COPY PASTING THIS COMMRNT BECAUSE I CAN RELATE TO IT

Quote:

Anonymous, over 1 year ago

LOVE ❤ it! Rated it "A+ above expectations"!

If you are into voyeur husband scenarios, this story is a MUST READ.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Monotonous and just kind of stupid. What a waste of time. Is this written by a woman who's just trying to push an agenda, to try to encourage the female dogs to be out there running around loose? Don't know why anybody would want to make the main character such a pathetic fool unless they're kind of just hating men in general....

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is an EXCELLENT WIFE SEX STORY!

I GAVE IT A 5.0 = 100% (♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎!)

If you have a buddy who is a regular guest at your place, your WIFE starts feeling way TOO COMFORTABLE in his presence.

The narrator is a VOYEUR HUSBAND SIDE of which he was not aware. It probably was buried somewhere deep inside his psyche.

EXCERPT FROM THE STORY:

"... I am so mesmerized by the sight of Ron spanking Lisa that without thinking, I struggle with my zipper to free my rock hard erection. My shorts are already damp, a combination of sweat and my cock oozing..."

* * *

I discovered my own voyeur husband side in some comparable circumstances. If you have any predisposition to voyeurism, you become mesmerised and your brain turns foggy. Somethng in your mind is trying to protect you because "you can't handle the truth" as yet.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Truly idiotic and not the slightest bit erotic or sexy. I agree with a couple of other posts. The so called friend gets his ass beat to hell and then the whore wife becomes the ex whore wife. Why? She can’t be trusted and it’s just a matter of time before she starts fucking around if she hadn’t been already. Sorry baby but this is zero tolerance. No second chances or profuse apologies. I wouldn’t have stepped in. Not cuz I’d get off on seeing that shit. It would be to see if she will do the right thing. All too often in these stories the husband is blamed for not stopping the wife from cheating on him. Why didn’t you stop it? Because you are responsible for your own actions and I can’t and won’t always be there to save you from yourself. Bye bye whore!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Excerpt from page 1 of the story.

Quote:

Lisa is watering the plants in large pots lining the patio. When she bends over, the top of her dress falls open revealing her perfect breasts.

The weight of the drawstring and the gathered material cause the neckline to fall open. I can see both breasts swaying gently as she moves her can from side to side. I love how the dusky color of her nipples contrasts beautifully with the creamy skin of her breast.

I watch for a second before turning back to Ron. He is still staring. I don't pay attention to him staring since I am looking too.

End quote.

• • •

In my book this is ONE OF THE BEST

WIFE SEX STORIES ON LITEROTICA!

I gave you a 5.0 = 100% = A+!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You have a good story beginning here, although I think more confliction on his part would be warranted. This was my second reading it appears you've abandoned your story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I had the same type of event happen to me and my wife. I feel for[ the husband because I acted just like him . I got very turned on also and didn't intervene, just watch. My wife gave in and they had sex. I left the house and returned 20 min later. They both acted normal and I never told my wife that I watched her having sex.. She has never said anything ether. We are both still married but she does not drink much anymore.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

5.0 (*****!)

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I amcopy pasting somebody else's comment because I can relate to it.

Quote:

This is an excellent wife sex story. It is very erotic and totally true to life*. I really really loved it, gave it a 5+ (5.5 = 110%, ★★★★★+)!

________

* My wife was sober as a judge when she got caressed or groped at a big party on a huge property a number of years ago. It was a casual party, she wore daisy dukes and a cropped top.

I had made a stop at the resthroom and proceeded to get us drinks. When i was coming back, the guy who was sitting beside her was wispering something in her ear while he was caressing her bare thighs, starting at the knee and all the way to the rim of her shorts. She could not see me.

Nothing in my life had prepared me for such a situation. I froze; was unable to think, let alone act; i felt it all was happening to so.ebody else. I was totally mesmerized, was in a hypnotic trance of sorts. I knew it wasn't but it felt like an out-of-body experience.

I decided to approach them so she could see me. I looked at my wife and found her very very sexy.

I never told my wife that I saw her.

My brain managed to temporarily push that mamory onto the "back burner."

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

STRANGE AFTERNOON is an excellent wife sex story: gave it a 5.0 (100%, ☆☆☆☆☆+!)

The storyline was masterfully crafted whereby the erotic tension between drunk & horny Lisa and unscupulous Ron goes from inocent & "friendly" escalates to the point where her pussy may or may not have been penetrated. It really does not matter: the narrator discovered his strong voyeur side, and Lisa got the taste of many deegres of sexual freedom.

The dynamic of their marriage has changed forever.

NallusNallusabout 2 months ago

An emotional rating, story I can't be a judge.

That fucker deserves to get a painful divorce. Aaron guilt his whole life for his fucking stupidness. Do I didn't should I have done it sooner. Should I have done it sooner? Should I have stopped sooner all I get side. Up his ass to wake his pride up.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Cuck wimp

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