All Comments on 'Strange Bedfellows Ch. 03'

Very different, very intriguing1

Please, Illuminar, let Tyrant Tyso die in the ambush! Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Like the story, but interspersing modern language (wow, horny, okay, etc.) throughout throws it off. Also agree with a lot of commenters that I wish Lyra either hadn’t been brought in or would be eliminated soon. I would have liked it better if Katia hadn’t gotten pregnant (or found out she was) quite so quickly- maybe after she had the chance to find out that sex could actually be nice.

Great story

Very incredible! I do believe I've found a rare treasure of a story. Your characters are likable for the most part, but I would rather like to see Katia (Shara) develop her relationship with the others!

I'm very interested in where this goes, and I would love to read more!

I'm loving this story. Looking forward to more.

Love the story and also ADT.

One small editorial quibble, I think you overuse "hmm" when portraying your character's inner dialogue. Maybe a different interjection every now and again like "huh" just to break it up.

Love your stories.

I've loved this story from the start and this chapter didn't disappoint. It may seem like a simple story but the characters are the real stars of this tale. They are clearly defined and the dialog only reinforces this. The sexy bits are well placed and, well, very sexy. 5/5* Fav

Ooh, it's getting interesting. Awesome as always.

Great story!

Really liking what you are doing here. Great story

Good story to add to your wonderful world

I agree that I don't think Katia had gotten pregnant so fast before finding out how great sex can be. Also I'm super freaking tired of hearing the same thing over and over like "but he's the enemy." One time the exact same sentiment is thought by Katia sentences apart. We get it! Use a different phrase or something.

Exceptionally absorbing read. Looking forward to the relationships evolving. Unfortunately, for some reason am not allowed to give a star (5) rating; will report the issue.

Incredible storytelling. Thank you for writing this

Truly fantastic.

Simply put, this is a cracking good yarn!

I like the story very much, a little slow, but very compelling.