All Comments on 'Strange Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hi

Great!

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 10 years ago
Welcome

Well done. Quite and easy and entertaining read. Would seem appropriate for you to consider one or two additional chapters, which I am sure I would enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Quick, but lovely !

Not sure how you got both characters into the same city or town, nor do I care.

I think they should meet again, she seems willing. Have him spring for a hotel room though, and direct her to strip......slowly.

Thanks Don

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