All Comments on 'Strange Relationship'

Um, what the hell just happened here? Page 2 you had me in constant tension, wanting the young man himself, his teasing was incredibly arousing. But it all went downhill from the man he chose being a terrible lover, a complete and utter dive from how good you could have made it for her. And then wham, story over, no other parts to read or note from you at the end planning to add to it. The whole motivation for the reader is riding the hope, tension & excitement Caitlin had for herself & Ben to merge sexually as one.

Seriously.. WHAT happened??