All Comments on 'Stranger Than Truth Ch. 03'

Boy, I sure didn't see this twist coming. Intrigued to see the journey continue...

Anticipating the continuation, I am really enjoying this!

please keep it up, ive never been so into a story before, their lives feel so true....i cant wait for more

Your stories have all been great. This is the first time that I have commented on them, but they are very, very well written. Thanks for writing them. Keep up the good work.

Truly wonderful, deep and beautiful. As a submissive woman and formerly a 24/7 slave (long story there) I found this story to be one of the best I have ever read.

I feel no shame in saying it made me cry remembering what the early stages of 24/7 were like and how much I miss that life.

I just found this on 'Random', and I like your work. When I have more time I will explore your other work. Are you still writing?

My experience in bdsm is entirely second hand, primarily on Literotica and videos on certain websites. My favorite bondage websites are Hogtied, DeviceBondage, and SexuallyBroken.

I find “cum 12 times in an hour” arousing. “Until I’m bawling” pain is not my understanding of the “normal” bdsm that appeals to me, and it’s depiction is very different from what I find in the above-mentioned websites.

While there are exceptions, I do not find “until I’m bawling” to be a goal of the infliction of pain. I do not find as “normal” inflicting or enduring extreme pain as a goal in and of itself.

What I do find arousing, the fundamental aspect of bdsm that appeals to me, is the restraint and the pain that achieves the purpose of greatly intensifying the orgasm of the sub, or bottom. It is clear that the pleasure of the sub is the goal.

I like watching hot girls having screaming orgasms, far beyond those that could be endured without physical restraint, or could be achieved without heightened physical and/or mental stimulation. I like seeing sexual gratification of the “top” as part of this process.

This story has a main plot line of an accurate portrayal of bdsm, but at the same time shows main characters in a lifestyle that inflicts pain “until I’m bawling” as it’s own goal. In this story, Subs derive satisfaction solely from withstanding pain beyond the point of endurance, and Master inflicts pain with the use of safe words as an explicit goal, and without any thought of using heightened physical sensations as a tool for enhancing orgasm.

Shoot rules on the websites I like, as discussed in pre-shoot interviews with the models, specifically require breaking character and checking with the models immediately if tears appear, although some models state that they are “criers” and that tears are, for them, a release. “Handlers”, or tops, in pre-shoot interviews make clear to the models that tears are NEVER a goal. At no point do the scenes seek out pain to a point anywhere approaching uncontrollable sobbing. Use of safe words is rare on these websites, and then it is usually “yellow” or “mercy”, almost never “red”.

“Handlers” make clear in pre-shoot interviews with models that safe words are meant to be empowering for the models, and should be used for “I need some water” or “my nose itches” or “this rope needs to be adjusted”, and not just for “I can’t take anymore”. Safe words are a means of communication with the overall purpose of ensuring and enhancing the enjoyment of the sub.

Use of Safe words is depicted here as the goal of the Master; the whipping or other activity will not stop until the sub calls “red”. That is not at all my understanding of the type of bdsm that appeals to me.

To me, with an admittedly limited understanding, the portrayal in this story of bdsm with a goal of “until I’m sobbing” pain contradicts the purpose of “an accurate portrayal” that is the goal of the film in the plot line. To my limited understanding, any portrayal that does not include greatly enhanced pleasure of intense orgasms is misleading.