All Comments on 'Stranger to a New World Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
odd...

that he has no memories but `knows` so much about sex...much fun anyways.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Editing

A story with potential so far, but the typos are too common.

Misspelling Kitra's name in the introduction is not terrible, but it is an indication of carelessness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome start!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A very nice start

I liked this and hope to read more...without typos if possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
PHYSICS

I LIKE THE TENT CONCEPT? REMINDS OF HEINLEIN'S "GLORY ROAD". BE CAREFUL OF TYPOS. WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER.

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