by ophelia27
Nice little story - good pacing - and possible. We don't have a girl giving up her virginity (with multiple orgasms having first blown the guy and gotten eaten out) to the first guy she's ever had a date with - this is a mature woman who is far from home and able to break out of her usual boundaries
I liked the reasonableness of the action - the guy going to get a condom, the woman's disbelief at her own conduct - believeable sex.
The author is to be commended for omitting the seemingly mandatory fellation and cunnilingus that preceeds sex in almost every store on this list