by AlwaysOlder
Maybe when I am old and rich, I can find me a beautiful young woman. ...Wait...I am old, I'm not rich....Oh, well, a guy can have a fantssy, right?
Thanks for a pleasurable read.
Well done story. He is a beautiful person, who deserves the happiness and hot young woman in his life.
i was reading quite nasty mature stories before this which is what i was after tonight but i stumbled upon this and happily took in the romance, sort of wish it was longer. Not sure why you wrote 'drug' instead of 'dragged' though, im not being mean but just thought worth pointing out
I love your stories...I have only read the Catered Affair and this one, and they are well conceived. I hope you will write more. If you have ever read anything from komrad, you feel like the shorter version of his stories, but with more sexual content. My only encouragement would be to write a little longer story..3-4 pages...and develop the characters a bit more like komrad does. But you have a way with words...I have always wanted to write erotic stories, but I am still a working man at age 76...actually working harder than ever, and so do not have the time. Well done!
Just barely OK. All the "my darling" just came across as pretentious horseshit
Excellent fantasy adventure. The writer is a good one, for sure. I hope he/she comes back with new material someday.