All Comments on 'Strangers on a Plane Ch. 03'
by petitmort
- 4 Comments
prop69about 7 years agoI wonder how many Brothers marry a girl that reminded them of their sister. (and visa versa) Maybe they had a sexual relationship or at least a fantasy with their sibling.
The writing was excellent. A little problem with guessing the French words.
ellmarkoabout 7 years agoThe writing is just erotic. It is beautifully crafted. I only wish there was a translation of the French so as to completely understand. You certainly get the feel of it, even without, but a translation would enhance the writing moment.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoEllmarko is right, if your not fluent in French, reading this story is a struggle. I'd suggest that after you use French for the first time in your story, follow it up in English using (Italics), after that just use italics to convert.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI know ZERO French and had no problem with the stories. The context clues are more than enough to figure out what is being said.
Great story. Made it hard not to cum.
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