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Click hereHe stood as close to her as possible, wrapping his muscular arms around her torso, bending his face down to press his cheek against hers. Her arms came up almost of their own volition and circled his neck. She leaned against him and snuggled into his body, feeling him hold her as securely as the restraints had done. She basked in the warmth and safety of his embrace, breathing in their mingled faint scents of sex, sweat, soap, and deodorant. She was content to stay just like this as long as he would hold her.
They stood together like that for several minutes, holding each other close and feeling the combined rhythms of their beating hearts. His hands lovingly caressed her back, her buttocks, her shoulders, her hair. He felt her full breasts flattened against his chest; felt his flaccid penis nestling against her belly; felt his heart swell with love and happiness. This was everything he wanted.
After a long moment, she sighed deeply, looking up at him with a peaceful smile.
"Have I ever told you how much I love you?" she asked him softly, nuzzling her nose against his. He squeezed her tighter and kissed her mouth.
"Maybe once or twice," he replied, smiling back at her, "but I will never get tired of hearing it."
- COMMENTS
MasterBlogmanover 1 year agoI don't usually like sadistic predicament stories, but the way you contextualized it a part of a loving and consensual relationship the brings pleasure through pain made it work for me. Intensely hot, with vivid descriptions of sexual pleasure. Great work.
gentleone58over 7 years agoThis was a wonderfully well-written story. There are elements of it that would be my thing, but the way it is written it is erotic. The Dom may seem mean, but he is observing her and does check with her even if she does not respond. For someone, she is bringing along into the lifestyle although not all what I like he is certainly doing quite well. A man who is becoming dominant for her is learning all the right things and has quite the imagination in how he orchestrates their session. Very well done. 5 stars for sure
Anonymousover 7 years agoWhile some particulars aren't my thing, the way you put it all together makes it erotic for me. You gave us a solid base to understand their dynamic, then you drizzled consent and care throughout. For me, those elements are fundamental to enjoying a more challenging scene. That is what keeps your dom from coming across as mean pick and you fully succeeded here.
It is critical for authors to understand that readers know only what you tell and show to us. We then interpret that info based on our own experiences and knowledge. We don't have the background and depth about a person, real or fictional, that the author has. We interpret a story or character diffently than the author intended when the author doesn't give us the necessary information. Actions, emotions, motivations, the subtle differences created by the choice of one word over another are all critical. You put it all together very well on this piece.
UnicornInPhillyover 7 years agoDidn't you read the story? She is bringing him along, she introduced him to D/s and he is giving her what she needs and wants. Anonymous needs to actually read the entire story.
FASfanover 7 years agoThis was really top-of-the-tree stuff, CalypsoInPhilly -- one of the best this year!
Thank you for sharing, well done, and please have five big shiny stars from me.
