by PulpWyatt
Sex could be longer (in fact, it feels like it should be longer), but everything else was quite good, in my opinion.
Great story. I feel there was a missed opportunity with Natia in the beginning, and the sex at the end could have last a bit longer for the pay-off, but this is one of the few stories where I actually enjoyed the character development.
I came for the sex, stayed for the interesting escape plot that was easy to visualize.