All Comments on 'Strawter Family does Incest Porn Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Hope we don’t have to wait to long for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Plz don't take long to make another. This is gold

CarnaleyeCarnaleyeover 6 years ago
Simulating Stuff

Very hot and Perverted!. The descriptions are natural and simulating. Great work soull71. A masterpiece !.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Hope he finds the cameras and rips them out and let's them know what he thinks about being spied on.

reh1947reh1947over 6 years ago
Very god story

Very good, excellent descriptions very hot, just one other small comment, all clubs like that, that I know of, never use last names when being introduced. Otherwise very good, my sister and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Danny8719Danny8719over 6 years ago
Mom

Really enjoying the story, can't wait for the next part and I'm all for joining Martin and Rachel, the only thing I don't like is Martins mother I can't stand her

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Martin's Sister and Mother

I like how they were all like you only need us. But when they came to the camp they started to talk about William while fucking Martin. Like Jesus ironic much?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Really hope this story continues soon 🤞🏻

HOTTCOCOHOTTCOCOabout 6 years ago
Good story, but...

I think the story concept is good, but there are some readability issues. There are a lot of incomplete sentences and several instances where it gets confusing because you can't tell which character is talking or being described. Keep writing. I recommend having someone proofread and edit before you publish.

jneric2691jneric2691almost 6 years ago

Can't wait to see where it goes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Still hoping for more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Bring Lulu back soon to have some fun with the family. But I hope there’s not much action with Rachel’s brother/ father

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Next chapter please

I like this story it need more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Third time reading this and still hoping for another chapter????

soul71soul71over 5 years agoAuthor

Just informing you all that part 4 has been uploaded.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love Lula, want more of her. Can't stand William, I'd like him lost

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