All Comments on 'Strawter Family does Incest Porn Ch. 04'

Been waiting for this for a while. Never so glad that William fell flat when compared to Martin. Glad to see Lula back and in the mix. I guess with the penthouse filled with cameras that Old Goldburg will see the Strawter Family Thanksgiving Sexpectacular!

very hot story buddy first time read it i approve keep up good work

All the chapters regarding Strawter Family are too much exciting. In this regard I request you to publish a multi chapter basis Indian family saga( I'm an Indian and in this site absence of good indian writer & your superb description compel me to do this ).Please please keep my request, I will be grateful to you forever. The plot is as below :

The title : Holy Bengalee Family

Characters : 1. Locketdebi (54 yrs ,38-28-40,film actress cum politician,widow )

2.Sreelekhadebi ( 36 yrs, 36-29-38, film actress cum dancer,daughter of Locketdebi )

3.Suman (18 yrs, student,son of Sreelekhadebi )

4.Koel ( 18 yrs, 34-26-36, film-actress, daughter of Sreelekhadebi )

5.Sujanbabu ( 35 yrs. Writer,husband of Sreelekhadebi )

6.Rupadebi (53 yrs, 37-28-39, film actress cum director, mother of Sujanbabu )

7.Ranjitbabu (54 yrs, husband of Rupadebi, film-producer)

8.Ramu (18 yrs, boy-servant of Locketdebi )

9.Raghu ( 36 yrs, Driver of Rupadebi and father of Ramu )

The family is religious minded & conservative type . Women earn most from film acting, but actually they earn from prostitution, nude dance in a hotel, acting in porn-film. All these illicit activities occur in strict secrecy without other's knowledge. With the proceeding of incidents, step by step all reveal to each other. Two divorces & various marriages ( marriage among the family members & servants ) will take place in front of the Goddess Maakali & the sacred honeymoon will held in that big worship-room. Please please develop & publish this. Thanks.

I know you did and ending to this story, but there is still so much to tell. Please consider writing a 5th chapter, or at least a sequel. After all he did promise to be the old man's personal doctor when he graduated. There are just way to many ways this story can go to leave it as it is.

I loved as I do all of your others.

Just read this series and it deserves a sequel with more Carrie, Rachel, Christen, Michelle and Lula

it does have a sequel but he only did one chapter of it I would love to see that series get more chapters it's called the lover camper he hinted at working on a second chapter to it but more pressing stories got the attention

Raped and abused son. Not for me

NOT BAD I LIKED IT ITS BEEN AWHILE I ACTUALLY FINSHED A SERIES. THX

I LIKED THE OPEN ENDING JUST IN CASE. MAYBE YOU COULD INVOLVE THE OLD RICH GUY MORE SOMETHING ABOUT THE CAMP OR MARTIN BEING A SUCCESSOR OR SOMETHING ON THE LINE AND ALL THAT BLAH BLAH BLAH STUFFING.....LMAO

So, a few paragraphs after William is just "inspired to try harder" when Christen tells him his pussy licking isn't good enough...he suddenly doesn't give a damn, and never did. He's determined to make them "moan his name" from his oral skills...then a paragraph or two later, he "licks for five minutes". And Michelle is telling him "oh you *do* know how to eat a pussy" then she's glaring at him for his perfunctory, unsatisfying efforts. Which is it? Is he "driven to try harder" and his mother "made sure he knew how to eat pussy" or is he an asshole who had to be repeatedly reminded and who didn't care about eating Michelle and Christen well until he was scolded?

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He's determined to make up for the "one area Martin had him beat in" (dick size) with his oral skills...then he's a self-absorbed dickhead who barely licks them before demanding they suck him. I get that you didn't want him to be as good as Martin or something, but direct contradictions within paragraphs of each other just make it seem like you mashed two drafts together and published it. I'm still liking the story...in fact, if I didn't, I wouldn't care about the disconnect. But I wanted to point it out. Maybe I noticed it more because I don't love the idea of Martin sharing Michelle and Christen with guys, so I was paying more attention to the actions of the guy who was going to be screwing them...idk. No offense intended, I enjoy your work, the conflicting descriptions of William's actions/behavior just bugged me.

Gah. "..."We had a deal, we'll fuck him as promised," Christen said in a monotone voice. ..."

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And then they leave. Without Carrie saying "no, absolutely not" or something like that. Christen just insists that she and Michelle will fuck (the suddenly uncaring cunnilinguist) William as agreed...and then they leave without doing it. I don't mind, of course, but it's another contradictory behavior. And the rest of the page focuses a lot on how William was a selfish lover, and needed to be taught. So basically on page 2, the section from the initial "mmmhmmm" (top of the page) to "tasting her paradise" (or from "tasting her paradise" to the top of the page, if you prefer) was filled with statements about Williams skill, and determination to please them orally...then Christen "sees something in his eyes", and suddenly he didn't try to please them, and never planned to. Maybe if William had had some internal monologue where he changed his mind, or said "that's got to be good enough" or something similar...no, it just doesn't make sense. He knows Martin pleases them orally and vaginally, and that they love his dick...and he knows they love it, and him. The previous page helps confirm that. But now he suddenly is sure that they'll be more than pleased with his smaller dick, and lackluster oral skills... because he's pretty? Ah well. Still, fun story. And I wouldn't mind reading more.

yes keep story going plz

Ok so he didn't lose them but it is really my type of story while it's interesting ill admit that and I fully get the idea of not wanting to bring attention to them by him not fucking someone else it should have been just between the original 3 Lula,his mom and sister Lula would have taken the attention off the other 2 relationship with him instead you brought in other guys in the mix some I get is ok with that but most definitely didn't wanna know that cause in the end all that will do is cause serious problems only people who don't think it will is some women and cucks but most men and women know it will cause problems in the end I also don't like how they used him through the story without even taking in account what he might think about the situation and also the blackmail that was no doubt setup between his mom,sister and Rachael while interesting I won't be rereading this series

Honestly I see lots and lots of little ones around for Martin Though for his father, I'm thinking that his gambling debts became so great he ran out of country and got a sex change which only ended him eventually being a fuck slave because of both the sex change and massive piles of debt

More, please!