by HansTrimble
The twist was telegraphed, but that didn't take anything away from the story. You seem to favor the sweet romance genre, which is just fine.
Really nice story if only it was that easy. My wife (#2) and I met at PWP (look it up) in 1985 and spent our first 2 dates talking and listening to each other and it clicked and as noted in a "rock song" of the era "even the bad times were good" and still ARE !!!
I seriously doubt that anyone who read the story didn’t see that ending coming, but it still brought a smile to my face when I got there. Very nice.
Seems that I've read this story before and gave it good marks but didn't leave a comment, unless it was the anony one. Guess back them I was just too shy to put my name to the comments I left. Still enjoyed the story, thanks.