All Comments on 'Stripper, Mom, and Son'

Grammar is lacking and it jumps between past and present tense which is annoying.

Apart from a few spelling mistakes, it wasn’t bad :)

An excellent first story! Looking forward to more stories with the moms. 😈

hope you have him take his stepmom in the next one

Chapter 2 is coming I hope to finish this out. Great first story and again, I hope you continue this.

That was pretty wild, I look forward to part two.

Please write a chapter 2. Keep going and get Brittany involved. This could get really hot.

Thank you for ruining strip clubs for me with this mess. 1star.

It doesn't matter if this was your first story. It doesn't make up for bad storytelling.

Now see about getting a threeway with his sexy stepmom that he couldn't stop drooling over. I'm sure his birthmother would go for it easily.

I really thought it was going to be his stepmom working there. That seemed to be where it was going and it would've made more sense. But that was only one problem with the story.

Hopefully you didn't ruin strip clubs for too many people after they read this garbage.

1 star because I can't go lower.

Pay attention to your tense. You keep switching between past and present tense.

Great first story, hope there is a sequel to come

Great story.

get britany involved!!!!

GREAT STORY! Really enjoyed it. Hope there's more to come.

His father's whores get off on teasing him, but won't fuck him. That's reserved for his father. But he gets to fuck some back alley whore his mother picked out for him. So he doesn't get to fuck either mom, but he gets the possibility of a disease from some random slut, and his 2 mother's get their jollies at his expense. But at least he found out that he was an accident from an orgy, and his real mom gave him away. Sucks to be him.

I hope to read more someday! What happens next to these lovable characters?

I found a film of my wifes hen night and there was a stripper involved,he starts by dancing around the women before he pulls my wife to be on stage,all the women are going mad as he waves his big black cock in her face,she then starts sucking it and is joined by my mother on the stage! She to gives him a blowjob and to the surprise of everyone takes her top off and pulls her tits out! His cock is between her tits and all you can hear is the women shouting for my fiance to do the same,incredibly she does and this guy is moving from one to the other,my fiance starts shaking her head as my mother undoes her skirt and kicks it off, he asks for a chair from the crowd and gets my mother to lean over it! He pulls her knickers down and gives it to her on stage with my fiance watching with her tits out! He points at her and the crowd now what he means,off off off they chanted,she gives in to the vocal crowd and removes her three quarter length trousers,my mother slapped the guys arse and moved aside for her,my future wife is being fucked by a black cock,there were more screams from the crowd as another stripper appeared, he gets on stage and fucks my mother,then there was a break in the film then it came back on and looked like it was in the strippers changing room,the two guys are laughing then open the door to my fiance and her sister,here's one for you guys two sisters one of them said,both of them get on the floor and take them in their mouths,karla was first to be fucked and stood against the wall taking him,my fiance got lifted to a desk and got fucked on it,

You keep switching back and forth between past and present tense. It's a bit jarring