All Comments on 'Stuck in the Washing Machine'

Love it! Can we expect a follow-up? ;)

I loved it. Please continue.

Excellent, really deserves much more of the story to be developed and who was Alice's dad ? Xara also needs to have her pov.

Thanks all.

I started writing this with Xara as narrator, and Will and Sally had some POV too, and there was stuff about Xara's mother. But the story ground to a halt and lacked that spark that makes a story actually interesting.

So I pretty much rewrote the story to put the emphasis firmly on Erica and Don, and left Xara's motivation as a mystery, and it works much better as a result. Definitely there is scope for a sequel, though I only have fragments to juggle with at the moment.

This is good . I'm sure it will continue .

Good call on limiting Xara's POV, I definitely think it works well with her being more of a mystery (the grand manipulator behind the scenes, or just a femme fatale? Or both? ;)). I'd certainly be on board with your keeping any POV sections from her either very brief or not having any altogether, and letting her actions roll around inside the heads of the other characters and tantalise the audience!

Erica wanted the possibility of absolution by pretending to be Sally stuck in the washer. So many times my mother wanted me to " just stick it in" while I waited for permission.

I am so sorry but i found the blackmail almost insignificant. Admittedly Erica has a lot to lose but she isn't really forced.

It was never really about forcing Erica. It was about nudging her back into being the slut she used to be. The incest was an unintended consequence of that.

Sir I only read mom, son, or brother, sister stories . Please go back through the story. In one portion you implied that the husband was dead, then switched to be living. There's a couple of other things but I'll not list them. I don't pay attention to periods, comas or any of that other stuff. For me if the story has good flow and build up I'm good. Keep writing but pay attention to the story line ( is he like or dead(

Dear Anon, Erica's first husband, Charles died long ago; Charles was Don's father. Her second husband, Will, is Xara's father, and very much alive.

Great story. 5stars

Wow. Can't wait for the sequel. 😘

Very hot story with a good build to the main event. Really excited by the idea of a horny mother that lusts for her son. Goes so far as to set up a bizarre situation where she thinks she’s tricking him. Only to learn she’s been set up by her friend. The son knowing the entire time who he’s fucking. The incest creampie is always the hot part. A guy pumping that rich jizz deep into the most forbidden pussy and taking such a bold risk.