by kevinnash
I too hope that she got pregnant, it is the most beautiful act of love between sister and brother!
Where did you put the plot?
Without a plot, you can't have a story.
Since it cannot be a story, what do you call this?
Might as well have replace names with 'male' and 'female', and pronouns with something less personal. Maybe 'it'. This wouldn't have been less boring if you had done that.
This is a great story that almost validates incest between siblings. Well described with intense emotions within each party. The situation and characters are most believable.
Never screwed either of my sisters but have had substantial sex with girls (2) that had incestuous interactions with their brothers. BTW neither regretted their incest.
After her orgasm, did she fart? I love it when my sisters farts after we fuck.
No! She does not get PG.
Keep the story going when they get home and enjoy each other many more pleasurable times.
Needs another chapter, or more. How do they spend the rest of their night? What are things like after their parents get back? Maybe parents are delayed in returning... Many possibilities. Keep up the good work!
The sex was very enjoyable to read, but again this was too short. The first story was just as short, but there was a little more plot there. This could be a lot better if you can add more to the story between these two. Please consider this for the next chapter.
Keep building to the Ultimate Explosion.
Fantastic brother and sister play time.
Can’t wait for the next coupling.
Another chapter please!
Liking it, but would love for you to continue on this one as well as some of the others. Kinda' feel like you're
leaving us hangin'
That was awesome. Loved how she just decided she had to have her brothers cock in her pussy. Well written story and I give it an easy 10 stars…
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Noh, this is no 5 star story.
This chapter is by it self just a simple porn script, but read together with Ch. 1 it becomes a light and very shallow erotic story, with hardly any emotions, except lust, being described -- although competently written. After reading we don't know any more about the characters than when we started (except for some physical attributes, that is).
Fairly boring, in my mind.
Way too fast, unrealistic! I thought part 2 might improve but it was over ... and I stayed limp