All Comments on 'Stuck Inside with My Hot Sister'

Why is it always " her tits were small, but..."

It should be "her tits are small AND beautifully shaped."

B cups are great, so are B and C. I love small tits, they are so beautiful and so SENSITIVE.

I felt that they got there too quickly, but it was still a good fun and sexy story.

5-stars.

too short to get 5*, but i liked it

Don’t stop there….

4.5 stars. (Ok, 5)

Tc

She is still horney! You know she wants to take it for a ride now. Get back to writing!

Yet another writer who doesn't know that only about 5% of a cumshot comes from his balls.

The rest of the story was barely credible.

Your writing is a bit too uniformly subject followed by object. With the exception of the dialogue, all of the sentences felt the same. Use more verbs at the beginning of sentences, and maybe a transition or conjunction every ever now and again. With some sentences you could try using a prepositional phrase to start things off. The majority of your sentences can still be subject followed by object, but it's good to mix it up once or twice a paragraph else it seems more like a list of events instead of a story. Just a thought.

It's not believable, nor is it something I'd want to experience.

isn't it funny how people who can't write sign on as anonymous to berate other peoples stories? keep writing.

SHE CAN SUCK MY COCK, LOL

AWESOME short story.

We need MORE!!!

Can’t wait for his sister to swallow !

Great start

5 stars and more

A little brother’s dream.

This made her brother exciter.

Can’t wait for the next adventure.

Mmmmm so hot, Nothing better than a great blowjob in a snow storm. Well written. Worth 10 stars….

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Hot! 5 stars.